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A couple of times ago, I read an article on the negative impact of the transplantation, or introduction of new species to new environments. One of them was about a kind of frog, I do not remember the exact name, which was introduced to some parts of Australia in order to eliminate the effect of an intrusive species. At first, this species worked well, but after a while it itself became a new problem for the area. To further elaborate on this, introducing new species to an area might cause severe damages to the native species in terms of available food, prey, territory, or other things. So, human should take care of these issues.
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Are these sentences correct?
A couple of times Some time ago, I read an article on the negative impact of the transplantation, or the introduction of new species to new environments. One of them the examples was about a kind species of frog that I do not remember the exact name to. which It was introduced to some parts of Australia in order to eliminate mitigate the effect of an intrusive species. At first, this species transplantation worked well, but after a while, it itself became a new problem for the area. To further elaborate on this, introducing new species to an area might cause severe damages to the native species in terms of by affecting the the availability of food, prey[I cancelled this word because it is very similar to "food" in this context, so it's redundant], territory, or other things. So Therefore, humans should exercise caution when considering a transplantation.take care of these issues.Note: I have corrected some errors and tried to make your writing sound more natural. I hope this helps! :)
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