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Short essay
Nowadays, mobile phones have become a part of our life and we use them every often.("Nowadays" implies the present, so you would either have to change to present tense or use another adverb here (like "recently") and keep present tense).
Many years ago we just used them to phone m_____ phone c_____,.
hHowever, today, we can use them to surf the Net, we can speak with my friends on different social networking websites,make _______ photos, write e-mail_ or and sms text messages and so on.
However, mobile phones there are __________ some disadvantages, too.
If you would like to relax and stay far away from our work then mobile phones can cause problem if we do not like to turning off them because we are available so anybody can distrupt you.
(Try this sentence again. Actually, make two or three sentences here. Make it simpler and stick with "you" or "we", not both.)
One of the most greatest andvantages (spelling) of using a phone is that we can keep in contact with our family and friends mainly ____________ if we live far from them.We can keep in touch via Skype, WhatsApp, or Facebook. Thank_ to these phone applications, the contact is not interrupted and we can be informed (stay up to date?).
(Not sure what you mean by "the contact is not..."). Try it again!
Since mobile phones are used for many things, many peolpe (spelling) feel bad without a phone and they fell (spelling) lost, mainly _________ if they are __ an unknown city or they are in a dangerous situation.
To sum up, mobile phones are very useful if we would like to keep ___ contact _____ each other. However, excessive using use of mobile phones can cause _ deterioration of relationships if we do not pay enough attention time __ each other.0 votedApril 12, 20171- Komunikació problémák Zsuzsa - Hű! Olyan gyors beszélsz és nem értem semmi! Mária - Bocsánat! Gondoltam, hogy haladó szint tanuló voltam. Zsuzsa - Csak ha! (Akarok mondani, valamit mint hogy "Yeah, I wish".) Mária - Tényleg? Melyik szinten vagy? Zsuzsa - Csak kezdő szint vagyok, annak ellenére tíz ho tanulom. Mária - De jól beszélsz! Hamar közép szinten leszel! Zsuzsa - Remélem, hogy igazad lesz. Eközben, beszélj lassan légy szíves! Mária - Oké. Megígérem!April 11, 201750
Magical English
English is a wonderful language. If you are learning it step by step, you will discover lots of magical stuffs. I really like learning English. What were your best experiances during studying English?Below are opportunities for you to make corrections. Would you like to try?
were - I would use present perfect here, since I assume the reader is still studying English presently.
experiances - spelling mistake.
during - there is a better word you could use here.
Good job! Keep it up!
0 votedApril 11, 20175- Egy furcsa mese: Miért nem nézni meg a videómat? Árpád - Meg tudtad nézni a videómat szombaton? Előd - Sajnos nem, a számítógépen nem működött. Eltört a winchesterem. Árpád - Milyen kár! Még törött? Előd - Nem, tegnap megjavították. Árpád - Nagyon örülök! Szóval, feltételezem, hogy ma meg tudtad nézni, nem igaz? Előd - Hát nem. Árpád - Szar! Nekem mondtad, hogy megnézd! Most érezek rossz magam. Neked kellene csinálni, hogy mit mondj. Előd - Igazad van. Bocsánat. Árpád - Megbocsátok, barátom.April 7, 2017101
Hi Lorenzo,
I enjoyed your essay and made some notes for you below. I think it's important for you to correct your own work whenever possible. That's a great way to learn!
Best,
ElliotThe climate change in my town
Nowadays we can hear a lot of people all around the world talking about the problem of the climate change. For the most part of the experts this problem is caused by the humans, with their cars, industries and garbage that pollute the environment. The increase of* the average temperatures causes the melting of the ice** in some parts of the world and drought and famine in others. This problem is getting*** visible also in the Alps. Yesterday, I was speaking with an old man that has been living here for 70 years. He said that until 30-40 years ago, the winter average temperature was**** 20-25°C below and in* some days it could reach***** 30-33°C below. But in the last winters this is****** never happened. The lowest temperature of this winter has been 17°C below. Also the quantity of snow is******* decreased in the last years, and this has caused problems both for the local economy and for the water reserves.Here are some things for you to think about and correct. Also, I gave you some corrections that may have been difficult to figure out on your own.
* What is a better preposition to use here?
** "the melting of the ice" --> "ice to melt"
*** What is better word here? Hint: it starts with a "b".
**** This is a previous past. What tense should you use?
***** "Reach" would mean "rise". Here you want to say "fall to".
****** What tense should you use here? Something started in the past and continues today.
0 votedMarch 16, 20174Hi Oscar. Would you like to make corrections to your work? I think this is the best way to learn. I've highlighted the portions that could use correcting. Good luck!
Why is First Certificate in English necessary in Spain?
In Spain, the most people say they have an intermediate English level, and it is a fact that it is not true. I think one of the mainly reasons because we don't have the same level in English as our neighbours in the north is because we are used to watch TV series, films and shows [......] completely dubbed.
In my point of view, here we have to show our FCE in interviews because probably, the person who is interviewing you doesn't have [... ....] enough level to check out if you are in a B2 level. For this reason, if you don't have your FCE in Spain likely you are going to face many difficults even to get an interview if English is a killer question.** I didn't quite understand you here.
0 votedMarch 7, 20170
