Corrections · 5
Hi Lorenzo,
I enjoyed your essay and made some notes for you below. I think it's important for you to correct your own work whenever possible. That's a great way to learn!
Best,
Elliot
The climate change in my town
Nowadays we can hear a lot of people all around the world talking about the problem of the climate change. For the most part of the experts this problem is caused by the humans, with their cars, industries and garbage that pollute the environment. The increase of* the average temperatures causes the melting of the ice** in some parts of the world and drought and famine in others. This problem is getting*** visible also in the Alps. Yesterday, I was speaking with an old man that has been living here for 70 years. He said that until 30-40 years ago, the winter average temperature was**** 20-25°C below and in* some days it could reach***** 30-33°C below. But in the last winters this is****** never happened. The lowest temperature of this winter has been 17°C below. Also the quantity of snow is******* decreased in the last years, and this has caused problems both for the local economy and for the water reserves.Here are some things for you to think about and correct. Also, I gave you some corrections that may have been difficult to figure out on your own.
* What is a better preposition to use here?
** "the melting of the ice" --> "ice to melt"
*** What is better word here? Hint: it starts with a "b".
**** This is a previous past. What tense should you use?
***** "Reach" would mean "rise". Here you want to say "fall to".
****** What tense should you use here? Something started in the past and continues today.
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