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Making sweets
One of my hobbies is (are) to make sweets and I like to bake cakes and cookies in my free(spare?) time. There are hundreds of easy recipes on the internet nowadays, but sometimes they don't work well; even though I follow them thoroughly from measuring ingredients to setting a proper temperature of the oven. I suppose that's what is difficult about baking pastries. The reason why is because each oven has each different performances. That is to say, baking time and temperature differ depending on the type of ovens that you use. So it is needed to try and adjust them until figuring out the best way to bake with your own oven. That is kind of hard work (tough), but it makes me even happier when I figured it out.0 votedAugust 24, 20161A film that provokes me
I believe that every successful films should have the ability to create emotions in(to) the audience. For example, a good horror film would not just frighten the audience by "jump-scares" or terrifying monsters. It can also(would instead) generate a tense, ghastly and mystifying atmosphere that allowing audiences to fully immerse themselves into the film. Among the most memorable films I have watched, one film called "Compliance" provoked anger in me.
The film is based on a real(true) story in the United States. It is about an antagonist trying to pressure a girl into doing something unethical. He achieves that by pretending to be a police officer and forcing the girl to comply to his orders. However, the girl is stupid enough to succumb to the authority as she never questions the authenticity (authority?) of the police officer. Eventually, she involuntarily got (gets) raped because of her blind compliance to such authority.
I was very furious when I was watching (watched) the film. I thought the girl was too brainless and innocent. Moreover, seeing a young and naive girl being bullied infuriated me.Nonetheless, in the reality, the man was not charged guilty of carrying out the prank... (I don't get what you are saying here...the guy raped the girl by imposing that he is a police officer. How is this a prank?)
There is a bit of jumping of tenses. Like I don't really know if you are speaking of past tense or present tense.
Memphis -- 24/8/20160 votedAugust 24, 20160Help with my Curriculum Vitae
Hello my friends, I would like it if you could help me with this. I write a CV. If I have any mistakes or if there is a better way to write it, I'll be grateful if you helped me! Thank you very much.
(what is a CV? are you trying to write a cover letter/a resume? )
Age: 25
Address: Alta Tensión S/N Fracc. Xicapán 62220, Cuernavaca; Morelos
Telephone: 1024094
Cellphone: 7771415885
Email: [email protected]
Work experience
Production Planner / Quality Auditor
February 2016 – present day
FSI Pall Corporation, Cuernavaca; Morelos
Production scheduling based on customer orders using SAP system.
Implementation of quality and production processes applying KAIZEN and KPI’S.
Teamwork for application of KPI’S in Safety, Quality and Production areas.
Audit of raw materials and finished products.
Quality Auditor
May 2010 – March 2015
NISSAN, Cuernavaca; Morelos
Certified Quality Auditor of NISSAN vehicles.
Preparation of charts and reports about the vehicle’s quality audit.
Implement and modification of standard operating documents for quality assessment processes.
Feedback and presentation of the incidents to the responsible area and countermeasure request for tracking them.
Maintenance Technician
November 2008 – December 2009
MCDS, Cuernavaca; Morelos
Working in cooperation with engineers to implement operational processes and resolve failures in computer systems.
Education
Automotive Mechanical Engineering | Instituto Ingenieros de Morelos (IIM) | Cuernavaca Morelos | September 2014 – present day.
Graphic Design Degree | Universidad Internacional (UNINTER) | Cuernavaca Morelos | 2010-2013.
Computer systems Technician | CETEC | Cuernavaca Morelos | 2006 - 2008.
Languages
English Reading: Advanced Writing: Advanced Speaking: Advanced (lots of repetition here)
Skills/Certificates
SAP system
Microsoft Office Excel, Power Point, Word, Outlook
Certified of Adobe Photoshop, Adobe Illustrator, Solid Works
Use of forklifts certificate( Technically...skills are kind of the same as certificates in this context)
(Also, things seems to be a bit "choppy" Like if this is a cover letter/resume, maybe you should write a few sentences in the beginning and end to introduce/conclude your piece.)
0 votedJune 26, 20161some people's mean words hurt me
Yesterday, someone popped up and sent me some bad words to curse my country. I understand that you don't like my country, but it is still bad to humiliate people. I don't like cucumbers, but i won't smash it with my fist. Can't tell if he turns out to be a person disliked by me. If you don't like it/them,just stay away!There will always be people that like to hurt others...you can't really prevent it. Just remember that they don't understand. Alike how some westerners always criticize the China-Yulin festival for eating dogs...when they themselves also eat other animals and torture them. It is however more intense and turns to my need to type rampage essays to ignorant hypocrites who began screaming all across youtube about how:
1.)All Chinese should die
2.)The Japan war should have killed all the Chinese.
I am sure...I would rather be described as a cucumber-masher than be hated upon by ignorant hypocrites.
0 votedJune 26, 20161Beginner's Diary II
Hello Everyone,
(Correct me, please.)
In this chapter, I will speak a bit about me and about my country.
Well, when I say “I’m Brazilian”, everyone thinks “Oh yeah, so you are Brazilian, meaning beaches, carnival, football, summer, parties...” That’s a problem. I love my country, but I don’t like football (I prefer Volleyball). I don’t like summer or beaches (I prefer coldness. It is cold here today which is a rare situation).
Brazil is a wonderful country: several naturalistic beauties. We have coldness. When winter comes, sometimes there are snow in the south.
What do you know about Brazil? I’d like to know.
Well, I love music, movies and series. I listen to music every moment of my day. I read, listening music. I sleep, listening music. I do everything listening to music.
I watch some series - Friends, How I met your mother, Suits, Gothan and others. Uh... this moment I’m listening to Seafret - To the sea.
What do you listen? I want to know.
That's all folks!
CyaWhen people don't understand much about a particular country, they tend to assume the common stereotype without thinking about it. At least the stereotype to you wasn't really insulting as it would be for other Asians. Some stereotype for Asians include: you all eat dogs, you are rich, you are smart.
In terms of Brazil, I know nothing about it really. "heh" As I have never been there, or had relatives from there; I wouldn't know much.
I like to listen to ancient Chinese songs.
0 votedJune 26, 20160Employment and Competition
Employment and Competition
(Currently better choice), it is very difficult to find a job. There is more difficulty in finding an ideal employment, as there are a lot of competition. Once you are employed,other colleagues begin to compete with you. Every moment you are competing. You feel fear and boredom. Can the chance of employment be without competition? Can you work hard without competition? However, in order to develop business, competition is required; as is employment without competition is equivalent to unemployment. Competition without employment are a group of "crazy dogs". We(our society?) emphasize on neither prejudice employment nor prejudice competition; as they both lead to a negative effect, authority must be present to deal with the relation between them. Society needs full employment for security.There are some parts...bolded, that I am confused on what you are trying to say. Thus it seems like words are "jumping everywhere".
e.x. Once upon a time, a girl picked up an apple from a tree. She went into a cave and saw wolves. The wolves were a family pack. He picked apples and went home. (seems a bit everywhere...like what happened to the girl?, and who is he?)
0 votedJune 21, 20162really?!
Well I have pretty intense debates with people online - writing 200 lines+ - and we never say thank you. "lol"
When I help people, it also helps me. So for me...I don't really care if they reply with a thank you. But then again, I guess it is more respectful if you reply.
Thank you for your advice.
0 votedJune 18, 20160Feeling tired about English，but i sill want to go on.
Sometimes i fell very tired about studying english; most of the time i learn english from the internet. I find courses free of charge: continent like pronunciation, grammar and so on. I intend to pay for courses, but I don't have much choices. I always feel lonely, because there is no one learning with me (outside of the internet). it is very awful to learn english without (the proper) environment. I truly hope i can learn through this. Good luck.I personally learn Mandarin through watching Chinese drama on youtube, and then I post comments. When people reply in Chinese...I learn Mandarin through reading and writing. (but by using google translate "heh") I learn English through youtube - having conversations with random people, writing rampage essays to argue on a certain topic. Though learning English from courses didn't help me at all.
0 votedJune 18, 20162
