Making sweets One of my hobbies is to make sweets and I like to bake cakes and cookies in my free time. There are hundreds of easy recipes on the internet nowadays, but sometimes they don't work well

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Making sweets One of my hobbies is to make sweets and I like to bake cakes and cookies in my free time. There are hundreds of easy recipes on the internet nowadays, but sometimes they don't work well even though I follow them thoroughly from measuring ingredients to setting a proper temperature of the oven. I suppose that's what is difficult about baking pastries. The reason why is because each oven has each different performance. That is to say, baking time and temperature differ depending on ovens that you use. So it is needed to try and adjust them until figuring out the best way to bake with your own oven. That is kind of hard work, but it makes me even happier when I made it.

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Making Sweets

One of my hobbies is to make sweets. I like to bake cakes and cookies in my free time. There are hundreds of easy recipes on the internet, but sometimes they don't work well even if I follow them thoroughly from measuring ingredients to setting a proper temperature of the oven. I suppose that's what is difficult about baking pastries. The reason why baking is difficult is because the performance of each oven is different. Thus, baking time and temperature differ depending on the oven that you use. So you will need to adjust the settings before finding the best way to bake with your oven. Baking is a lot of hard work, but it makes me even happier when I have succeeded.

(Good job.... just a side note... 'Sweets' is British English and 'Desserts' would be American English. )

Making sweets Baking

One of my hobbies is baking. to make sweets and I like to bake cakes and cookies in my free time. There are hundreds of easy recipes on the internet nowadays, but sometimes they don't work well even though I follow them thoroughly, from measuring ingredients to setting a the proper temperature of the oven. I suppose that's what is difficult about baking pastries. The reason why is because each oven performs differently has each different performance. That is to say, the baking time and temperature differ depending on the ovens that you use. So it is you will needed to try and make adjustments them until you figure figuring out the best way to bake with your own oven. It'sThat is kind of hard work, but it makes me even happier when I succeed made it.

Baking

One of my hobbies is baking. I like to bake cakes and cookies in my free time. There are hundreds of easy recipes on the internet nowadays, but sometimes they don't work well even though I follow them thoroughly, from measuring ingredients to setting the proper temperature of the oven. I suppose that's what is difficult about baking pastries. The reason why is because each oven performs differently. That is to say, the baking time and temperature differ depending on the oven that you use. So you will need to try and make adjustments until you figure out the best way to bake with your own oven. It's hard work, but it makes me even happier when I succeed.

Great job!

Making sweets

One of my hobbies is (are) to make sweets and I like to bake cakes and cookies in my free(spare?) time. There are hundreds of easy recipes on the internet nowadays, but sometimes they don't work well; even though I follow them thoroughly from measuring ingredients to setting a proper temperature of the oven. I suppose that's what is difficult about baking pastries. The reason why is because each oven has each different performances. That is to say, baking time and temperature differ depending on the type of ovens that you use. So it is needed to try and adjust them until figuring out the best way to bake with your own oven. That is kind of hard work (tough), but it makes me even happier when I figured it out.

Making sweets

One of my hobbies is to make sweets and I like to bake cakes and cookies in my free time. There are hundreds of easy recipes on the internet nowadays, but sometimes they don't work well even though I follow them thoroughly from measuring ingredients to setting a proper temperature of the oven. I suppose that's what is difficult about baking pastries. The reason why is because each oven has each different performance. That is to say, baking time and temperature differ depending on ovens that you use. So it is needed to try and adjust them until figuring out the best way to bake with your own oven. That is kind of hard work, but it makes me even happier when I made it.

A few of my hobbies are to make sweets, as well as to bake cakes and cookies in my free time. There are hundreds of easy recipes on the internet now days, but sometimes they don't work well even though I follow them thoroughly, from measuring ingredients to setting the proper temperature of the oven. I suppose that's what is difficult about baking pastries. The reason why is because each oven performs differently. That is to say, baking time and oven temperature differ depending on the oven that I use. So, I will need to try and make adjustments until I figure out the best way to bake with my own oven. It is a lot of hard work, but it makes me even happier when I overcome it.

A main focus here is to kept the paragraph or "point of view" in first person. Because you are talking about your past experience, the subject of the sentence should usually be "I". Not "you".

A few of my hobbies are to make sweets, as well as to bake cakes and cookies in my free time. There are hundreds of easy recipes on the internet now days, but sometimes they don't work well even though YOU follow them thoroughly, from measuring ingredients to setting the proper temperature of the oven. I suppose that's what is difficult about baking pastries. The reason why is because each oven performs differently. That is to say, baking time and oven temperature differ depending on the oven that YOU use. So I will need to try and make adjustments until YOU figure out the best way to bake with my own oven. It is a lot of hard work, but it makes YOU even happier when I overcome it.

Here I have highlighted the points of views so you can see the confusion it may cause when changing back and forth from time to time.

I hope this helps!

Hi Steve, thank you for your comment. You are right! The results can change depending on brands of flour we use as well. "The Great British Bake-Off"という番組は、見たことがありません。おもしろそうですね。

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