Beginner's Diary II
Hello Everyone,
(Correct me, please.)
In this chapter, I will speak a bit about me and about my country.
Well, when I say “I’m Brazilian” everyone thinks “Oh yeah, are you Brazilian? beaches, carnaval, football, summer, parties...” that’s a problem, I love my country, but I don’t like football (I prefer Volleyball), I don’t like summer or beaches (I prefer cold time, It is cold here today, rare situation).
Brazil is a wonderful country, several natuarais beauties, we have cold, and sometimes there snow in south, when winter comes
What do you know about Brazil? I’d like to know.
Well, I love music, movies and series, I listen music every moment of my day, I read listening music, I sleep listening music, I do everything listening music.
I watch some series, as Friends, How I met your mother, Suits, Gothan and others. Uh... this moment I’m listening Seafret - To the sea.
What do you listen? I wanna know.
That's all folks!
Cya
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Beginner's Diary II
Hello Everyone,(Correct me, please.)
In this chapter, I will speak a bit about me and about my country.
Well, when I say “I’m Brazilian” everyone thinks “Oh yeah, are you Brazilian? beaches, carnaval, football, summer, parties...” that’s a problem, I love my country, but I don’t like football (I prefer Volleyball), I don’t like summer or beaches (I prefer cold time (seasons/times of year), It is cold here today, a rare situation(event)).
Brazil is a wonderful country, with several natuarais natural beauties(a lot of natural beauty/beautiful nature), we have cold temperatures, and sometimes there is snow in south, when winter comes
What do you know about Brazil? I’d like to know.
Well, I love music, movies and TV series, I listen to music every moment of my day(all the time/throughout the day), I read while listening to music, I sleep while listening to music, I do everything while listening to music.
I watch some TV series, such as Friends, How I Met Your Mother, Suits, Gotham and others. Uh... at this moment (at the moment/right now) I’m listening to Seafret - To the sea.
What do you listen to? I wanna know.
That's all folks!
Cya
This is very well written and detailed Ronny. Good work! I've corrected the mistakes. The words in brackets are suggestions to improve the style of your writing. Remember: we always say "listen to music".
At the moment I'm listening to Tame Impala. All the best!
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Beginner's Diary II
Hello, everyone!(Correct me, please.)
In this chapter, I will speak a bit about me and my country.
When I say, “I’m Brazilian,” everyone thinks, “Oh yeah, are you Brazilian? Beaches, Carnaval, football, summer, parties....” Here is my problem with this: I love my country, but I don’t like football (I prefer volleyball), nor do I like the summer or beach (I prefer cold weather. It is cold here today, which is rare).
Brazil is a wonderful country. several natuarais beauties (≤-- not sure what you are trying to say here) It is sometimes cold and snows in the south during winter.
What do you know about Brazil? I’d like to know.
I love music and watching movies and TV shows. I listen to music all throughout the day. In fact, I read while listening to music, I fall asleep while listening to music - I do everything while listening to music!
I watch shows like Friends, How I Met Your Mother, Suits, Gotham and many others. At the moment I’m listening to Seafret's "To The Sea."
What do you listen to? I wanna know.
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Beginner's Diary II
Hello Everyone,(Correct me, please.)
In this chapter, I will speak a bit about me and about my country.
Well, when I say “I’m Brazilian”, everyone thinks “Oh yeah, so you are Brazilian, meaning beaches, carnival, football, summer, parties...” That’s a problem. I love my country, but I don’t like football (I prefer Volleyball). I don’t like summer or beaches (I prefer coldness. It is cold here today which is a rare situation).
Brazil is a wonderful country: several naturalistic beauties. We have coldness. When winter comes, sometimes there are snow in the south.
What do you know about Brazil? I’d like to know.
Well, I love music, movies and series. I listen to music every moment of my day. I read, listening music. I sleep, listening music. I do everything listening to music.
I watch some series - Friends, How I met your mother, Suits, Gothan and others. Uh... this moment I’m listening to Seafret - To the sea.
What do you listen? I want to know.
That's all folks!
Cya
When people don't understand much about a particular country, they tend to assume the common stereotype without thinking about it. At least the stereotype to you wasn't really insulting as it would be for other Asians. Some stereotype for Asians include: you all eat dogs, you are rich, you are smart.
In terms of Brazil, I know nothing about it really. "heh" As I have never been there, or had relatives from there; I wouldn't know much.
I like to listen to ancient Chinese songs.
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