Employment and Competition
Employment and Competition
Now it is very difficult to find a job,it is much more difficult to find an ideal employment.While you are finding a job,many people finding a job is competing with you,Once you have been employed,other colleagues begin to compete with you..Every moment you are competing.Are you afraid? Are you bored?No other ways.Can you cherish the chance of the employment without competition?Can you work hard without competition?Developing business needs competition,at the same time the society security needs employment fully.Employment without competition is equivalent to unemployment,Competitors without employment were a group of crazy dogs.We emphasize neither prejudice employment.nor prejudice competition.They both lead to a negative effect。Authority should deal with the relation between them carefully.
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Employment and Competition
Employment and Competition(Currently better choice), it is very difficult to find a job. There is more difficulty in finding an ideal employment, as there are a lot of competition. Once you are employed,other colleagues begin to compete with you. Every moment you are competing. You feel fear and boredom. Can the chance of employment be without competition? Can you work hard without competition? However, in order to develop business, competition is required; as is employment without competition is equivalent to unemployment. Competition without employment are a group of "crazy dogs". We(our society?) emphasize on neither prejudice employment nor prejudice competition; as they both lead to a negative effect, authority must be present to deal with the relation between them. Society needs full employment for security.
There are some parts...bolded, that I am confused on what you are trying to say. Thus it seems like words are "jumping everywhere".
e.x. Once upon a time, a girl picked up an apple from a tree. She went into a cave and saw wolves. The wolves were a family pack. He picked apples and went home. (seems a bit everywhere...like what happened to the girl?, and who is he?)
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