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    June 4, 2016
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    Mikey, Salinas, and Aubery

    The older brother's name is Mikey and the younger sister's name is Salinas, who are both shown in the photo. with older brother and younger sister in the photo . They both were really close. They should have grew grown up together, but ten years ago a car accident deprived Mikey of his life ("took Mikey's life" sounds a little better). Salinas has lost her older brother forever.
    Ten years later, Salinas is 15 years old. Salinas's parents had a party for her on her 15th years old birthday. They invited some family, their friends, and a mysterious guest. This mysterious guest is a girl called named Aubery.
    After Mikey's death, his parents decided that to donate Mikey's some Mikey's organs to those in need, so Mikey's heart has was donated to Aubery. This heart has saved her life.
    Salinas and her family was were very excited when Aubery arrives arrived at the birthday party. Aubery and Salinas completely hit it off and acted like old friends. Salinas felt Aubery's heartbeat, and it was like her older brother had returned.
    Now, Aubery has became become a member of Salinas's family, and they are like sisters. Aubery replaces Salinas's older brother to accompanies her. Aubery has helped fill the space that Mikey left when he died.(I think thats what you were saying)
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    June 2, 2016
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    Alexis woke up early because she had to go to her school. Rose yelled to (told) Alexis that her breakfast was ready.
    Alexis replied that she was coming. She had got went downstairs and started to eat quickly because it was late.
    Alexis passed through the yard and had waited for the bus on the walkside. When the bus had appeared, Alexis got onto it and finally she had been was on her way to her school.
    She got to her school and had been trying tried to find her classroom. She saw an old man (you could just say teacher) sitting and she asked if that was the classroom number three. The teacher told her that she was right, that it was the classroom number three.
    Alexis felt happy and she sat beside a girl. The girl said that her name was Gina and she would be her classmate.
    Alexis answered that they would be classmates in that course. After that, both girls had returned home.
    Rose asked Alexis how her day had been. Alexis told her that it had been an excellent day.
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    May 30, 2016
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    How will AI affect our lives?

    Lately, Lee Sedol, the World Go Champion was defeated by Google’s AlphaGo inconceivably. As is known to all,The artificial intelligence waves are sweeping over the whole of world. It makes us, as human beings (you could also say humankind or as humans) think deeply about how will AI affects our life? lives.  Is AI friendly or frightening?
    As a coin has two sides. With the high efficiency of AI, factory production can save a flood a lot of time and won't need require as so many labor forces as now. Up to As of 2015, there are 855 AI enterprises set up all over the world. it These enterprises will create a great quantity of wealth, that which means there will be more fiscal revenue used to for public services.That makes citizens feel beatific I have no idea what you're trying to say here).
    However, the advent of AI is not that exciting for some people. They have People know that with the advancement of AI, sooner or later already known they would will be laid-off from their jobs (due to human inferiority to AI) sooner or later. In addition, they even feel negatively: I can't  Some people have negative emotions towards the advancement of AI, but I don't. It's becoming difficult to find good work treatment anymore.I can't find a job fitting that fits me forever...
    According to what I have said, what do you think?

    You don't have to put the human inferiority thing, I just thought it sounded cool. Also, in my opinion, AI is a bit scary and I don't really like that AI has the ability to replace humans in the workforce. The advancement of technology to the extent that it surpasses human intelligence really makes me nervous. Good job on your entry! If you have any questions, let me know! 

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    May 29, 2016
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    The sea is my dream

    Yesterday I bought two tickets to the sea. I am so happy about it! I have not been on to the sea for 5 years. I am going to go with my mother. The sea, I am so expecting looking forward to our meeting!
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    May 29, 2016
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    I don't like fish

    I ate some fish this morning. Usually I don't like fish, because I always can't get those fishbone right can't keep from swallowing the small fish bones.
    I ate them slowly this morning, really okay,and it was okay.I didn't meet fishbone which those want to inflict damage on me. (You could say, "I didn't find any harmful fish bones that could cause damage when I ate fish this morning).
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    May 29, 2016
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    Or have you yet to discover it ^^  My passion is music. I can't play well yet, but listening to music makes me happy.  
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    May 29, 2016
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    5/29/2016

    When I opened the door, he stood at the doorstep. He got had been soaked to the skin bone. His clothes stuck onto his wet skin and his used to -once puffy hair was now flattened by the rain.
    I invited him to come into the house. He pulled his luggage in and it had left a clear trail of water onto the floor. Stopping in front of the fireplace, he took off his wet outfit clothes and wrung the excess water out, hanging it onto the wooden chair for toasting it. to dry.He then sat down in front of the fireplace, held out his palms toward the fire, and tried to get some warm his body.
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    May 29, 2016
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    Literature can refer to anything scholarly that is written, so it could be talking about books, articles, other theses, etc.
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    May 29, 2016
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    Once I set a goal I will work hard and persevere until I achieve that goal.
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    May 29, 2016
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