Is this sentence makes sense? appreciate any better way of expressing this sentence~thank you !!
Once I set a goal, I will work really hard for it , stick to my aim until finally reach it.
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Is this sentence make sense?
(You need to learn how to ask questions correctly. This is one of the first things you should have learned in your English lessons.)
Present tense has three forms: it makes, it does make, it is making ("is make" is NOT a valid verb form)
Does this sentence make sense? (Yes, it does make sense.)
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Original: Once I set a goal, I will work really hard for it , stick to my aim until finally reach it.
Revision: Once I set a goal, I work really hard to achieve it. (better)
Once I set a goal, I work really hard and stick to it until I reach it. (awkward-sounding)
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Once I set a goal I will work hard and persevere until I achieve that goal.
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Once I set a goal, I work hard to achieve it. I stay focused until reach that goal.
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