Mikey, Salinas and Aubery
Older brother's name is Mikey, younger sister's name is Salinas with older brother and younger sister in the photo . They both were really close. They should have grew up together, but ten years ago, a car accident deprived Mikey of his life. Salinas has lost her older brother forever.
Ten years later, Salinas is 15 years old. Salinas's parents had a party for her on her 15 years old birthday. They invited some family, their friends and a mysterious guest. This mysterious guest is a girl, called Aubery.
After Mikey death, his parents decided that donate Mikey's some organs to those in need, so Mikey's heart has donated to Aubery. This heart has saved her life.
Salinas and her family was very excited when Aubery arrives birthday party. Aubery and Salinas completely hit it off and like old friends. Salinas felt Aubery's heartbeat, like her older bother returned.
Now, Aubery has became a member of Salinas's family, they are like sisters. Aubery replaces Salinas's older brother to accompanies her.
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Mikey, Salinas and Aubery
The older brother's name is Mikey. The younger sister is Salinas with older brother and younger sister in the photo. They both were really close. They should have grew up together, but ten years ago, a car accident deprived Mikey of his life. Salinas had lost her older brother forever.Ten years later, Salinas is 15 years old. Salinases parents had a party for her on her 15th birthday. They invited some family, their friends and a mysterious guest. This mysterious guest is a girl called Aubery.
After Mikey's death, his parents decided to donate some of Mikey's organs to those in need, so Mikey's heart was donated to Aubery. This heart has saved her life.
Salinas and her family were very excited when Aubery arrived at the birthday party. Aubery and Salinas completely hit it off like old friends. Salinas felt Aubery's heartbeat, like her older bother had returned.
Now, Aubery has became a member of Salinases family they are like sisters. Aubery replaces Salinases older brother to accompany her.
Very well written!
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Mikey, Salinas, and Aubery
The older brother's name is Mikey and the younger sister's name is Salinas, who are both shown in the photo. with older brother and younger sister in the photo . They both were really close. They should have grew grown up together, but ten years ago a car accident deprived Mikey of his life ("took Mikey's life" sounds a little better). Salinas has lost her older brother forever.Ten years later, Salinas is 15 years old. Salinas's parents had a party for her on her 15th years old birthday. They invited some family, their friends, and a mysterious guest. This mysterious guest is a girl called named Aubery.
After Mikey's death, his parents decided that to donate Mikey's some Mikey's organs to those in need, so Mikey's heart has was donated to Aubery. This heart has saved her life.
Salinas and her family was were very excited when Aubery arrives arrived at the birthday party. Aubery and Salinas completely hit it off and acted like old friends. Salinas felt Aubery's heartbeat, and it was like her older brother had returned.
Now, Aubery has became become a member of Salinas's family, and they are like sisters. Aubery replaces Salinas's older brother to accompanies her. Aubery has helped fill the space that Mikey left when he died.(I think thats what you were saying)
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@Anan I think it's a real story. I also love it.
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Is this a real story? That's really a moving story. I think that even though Mikey was far away for a long time but it seems to be like he is still alive with his family. I love this story :)
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