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5/29/2016 When I opened the door, he stood at the doorstep. He got soak to the skin. His clothes stuck onto his wet skin and his used-to-puffy hair was now flattened by the rain. I invited him to come into the house. He pulled his luggage in and it had left a clear trail of water onto the floor. Stopping in front of the fireplace, he took off his wet outfit and wrung the excess water out, hanging it onto the wooden chair for toasting it. He then sat down in front of the fireplace, held out his palms toward the fire and tried to get some warm.

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5/29/2016

When I opened the door, he stood at the doorstep. He got had been soaked to the skin bone. His clothes stuck onto his wet skin and his used to -once puffy hair was now flattened by the rain.
I invited him to come into the house. He pulled his luggage in and it had left a clear trail of water onto the floor. Stopping in front of the fireplace, he took off his wet outfit clothes and wrung the excess water out, hanging it onto the wooden chair for toasting it. to dry.He then sat down in front of the fireplace, held out his palms toward the fire, and tried to get some warm his body.
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5/29/2016

When I opened the door, he stood on the doorstep. He was soaked to the skin. His clothes stuck onto his wet skin and his usually puffy hair was now flattened by the rain.
I invited him  into the house. He pulled in his luggage and it  left a clear trail of water onto the floor. Stopping in front of the fireplace, he took off his wet outfit and wrung out the excess water out, hanging it onto the wooden chair for drying toasting it. He then sat down in front of the fireplace, held out his palms toward the fire and tried to get some warm.

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