Reported Speech II
Alexis woke up early because she had to go to her school. Rose yelled Alexis that her breakfast was ready.
Alexis replied that she was coming. She had got downstairs and stared to eat quickly because it was late.
Alexis passed through the yard and had waited for the bus on the walkside. when the bus had appeared, Alexis got onto it and finally she had been on her way to her school.
She got to her school and had been trying to find her classroom. She saw an old man sitting and she asked if that was the classroom number three. The teacher told her that she was right, that was the classroom number three.
Alexis felt happy and she sat beside a girl. The girl said that her name was Gina and she would be her classmate.
Alexis answered that they would be classmates in that course. Aft er that, both girls had returned home.
Rose asked how her day had been. Alexis told her that it had been an excellent day.
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Reported Speech II
Alexis woke up early because she had to go to her school. Rose yelled Alexis that her breakfast was ready.Alexis replied that she was coming. She had got downstairs and stared to eat quickly because it was late.
Alexis passed through the yard and had waited for the bus on the walkside. when the bus had appeared, Alexis got onto it and finally she had been on her way to her school.
She got to her school and tried to find her classroom. She saw an old man sitting ( where was he sitting? you should write more to make this clause clearier, i.e She saw an old man sitting near a window) and she asked if that was the classroom number three. The teacher told her that she was right, that was the classroom number three.
Alexis felt happy and she sat beside a girl. The girl said that her name was Gina and she would be her classmate. You used a lot " said" in your reported speech. Why don't you use other verbs to make your sentences varied? For example: The girl introduced to me that her name was Gina..."
Alexis answered that they would be classmates in that course. After that, both girls had returned home.
Rose asked how her day had been. Alexis told her that it had been an excellent day.
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Reported Speech II
Alexis woke up early because she had to go to her school. Rose yelled to (told) Alexis that her breakfast was ready.Alexis replied that she was coming. She had got went downstairs and started to eat quickly because it was late.
Alexis passed through the yard and had waited for the bus on the walkside. When the bus had appeared, Alexis got onto it and finally she had been was on her way to her school.
She got to her school and had been trying tried to find her classroom. She saw an old man (you could just say teacher) sitting and she asked if that was the classroom number three. The teacher told her that she was right, that it was the classroom number three.
Alexis felt happy and she sat beside a girl. The girl said that her name was Gina and she would be her classmate.
Alexis answered that they would be classmates in that course. After that, both girls had returned home.
Rose asked Alexis how her day had been. Alexis told her that it had been an excellent day.
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