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- some sentenses - 20160509 Just some sentenses, would you plz kindly help me to correct? Many people may complain that the tax is burden for them, because it reduces their disposable income. I believe each individual need to pay tax, otherwise a society cannot go well if without the support of taxation. In contrast, if without a great/healthy public transport system, dwellers will have difficult on commuting, and traffic congestions pose a threat to society efficiency. For example, in most countries, higher income groups are subject to a higher tax rate, while low income groups can receive subsidy from the state. In some occasions, people cannot restrict themselves well and are difficult to overcome some bad habits. For example, governments impose tax on cigarettes and liquids to encourage people to spend less on those categories. Therefore, people become more healthily and pressure on medical care systems can be also relieved accordingly. Nevertheless, if people are subject to a high tax rate, they may have no motivation to work hard, and enterprisers are also not willing to set up a business. To most people, to earn more money is the motivation for them, because it can support them to obtain a better living condition and gain a sense of accomplishment. In conclusion, I strongly believe that taxation is the lifeblood of one economy, even though a too-high tax rate brings adverse effect to the economy growth.May 9, 201620
- Low-cost Air Low-cost air companies create opportunities for people to travel across the borders of countries.Although we need to reduce unnecessary travels, I would still argue that the services provide by low-cost air are beneficial to the public. By taking cheap flights people may go to different countries for tourism, and enrich their experiences of varieties of cultures, thereby expanding their outlooks.Some people are possible to visit some countries to seek a better employment, and earn a higher income.Business owners can probably discovery potential business opportunities to earn more profits by exporting or importing products between different regions.But if price of air tickets rises a lot they will probably lose those opportunities. Meanwhile, some people hold the idea that raising airfaces can reduce the environmental impact which was brought by this industry.A higher price can discourage people to go for travel by air.If the frequency of flights decreases, then the greenhouse gas emissions by air will be reduced accordingly.Other problems associated with air industry, such as noise pollution and environmental destruction by building airport and related facilities, will be mitigated as well. I do not think it is necessary to increase the ticket price, because people ought to have chances to go to other places for tourism and recreation. may people, especially the workers who live in mega cities, are likely live under a huge pressure and always be busy on many kinds of affairs.If they can easily get a cheap flight, they may go farther for taking holidays.For examples, tourists from China can visit some tropical countries to taste local foods, but not spend their holidays on home. In conclusion, my view is that it is not reasonable to restrict low-cost air, because cheap flights bring significant values to people, even though air companies can reduce their environmental impact by technology innovation.May 7, 201620
- A letter - 20160501 You have some problems in your work and write a letter to a friend for advice. In your letter, Outline what you do in your job Explain the problems facing you Suggest what advice you want to take from your friend Dear Alex, I know you are overloaded with your work, but I do need your help and advice about some software programming problems I’m handling now. As you know, I just got promoted to a new position in my company as a software architect. One of my major responsibilities is to design and write the core software codes for an enterprise fund management system, especially for its database subsystem which requires efficient and robust software algorithms running there. But the latest performance of my program is not excellent enough, and occasionally there’s system crash either. I tried to improve as much as I can while I still haven’t managed to tackle all critical software bugs so far. Unfortunately I’m exhausted and cannot concentrate on them too much because my bosses just assigned me with some new challenging works. You have built a remarkable reputation in the software programming sector for your outstanding abilities on coding excellence, and your convincible experience on being consultant for enormous software giants e.g. Microsoft, google, Alibaba etc, so could you plz help to review the enclosed materials for my design and code and give me some ideas how should I improve their quality and efficiency. Thank you so much for helping me with this, and you know how important consultancy to not let my boss down! Kind regardsMay 1, 201630
- just several sentences, 20160429 The main reason for unemployment in rural areas are lack of infrastructure construction and government investment, which can be solved partially by the rural-to-urban shift. High-rise buildings are sometimes recognized as a city’s eyesores. Although the arts do not belong to core subject areas, they play important roles in the curriculum, for these subjects add spice to life. Building apartment blocks helps solve overcrowding in cities because these buildings can maximize their utilizations in terms of lands and spaces.April 28, 201610
- A letter(2) For the speaking section, I admit I have made some low level mistakes during the testing, such as I didn’t pronounce ‘subordinate’ fluently, and I wrongly said ‘household wife’ which should be actually ‘housewife’, in the part two I intended to say ‘my wife say apology to me’, while I didn’t control the time well so I believe I might not fully answered all the questions. Due to lack of IELTS experience I didn’t have such kind of awareness. One more bad thing is that I said ‘yes’ when the woman assessor confirmed with me ‘it is you apologized to your wife, right?’ Honestly speaking, I was not suited to the style of the woman assessor, because she interrupted me frequently, which I suppose an interference to me during whole of the test. But I know this is mostly to my personal ability, just want to try to explain something here for asking your understanding. For the listening part, I understand all the questions are objective but it’s a pity that in several places I caught the ideas correctly while wrote a wrong words due to missing capital letter, and using singular instead of plural. Thanks for my excellent technical background, since year 2006 I have been fortunately employed by Nokia, a telecommunication industry giant in the world. I worked at R&D department, and it requires me using spoken English and writing English every day for communicating with other colleagues across the rest of the world. By those facts I would say I have gained relative excellent English skills. And as I share in the third paragraph that taking another exam is extremely inconvenient for me, so I request to remark my writing, speaking and listening section. Any help from you would be truly appreciated. Thank for your efforts in advance. Best regardsApril 5, 201600
- A letter(1) Dear Sir or Madam, My name is ××× (Candidate No.: ×××). I took part in the IELTS test (General Training) on 19th Mar, 2016 for the purpose of migrating to New Zealand. Bearing the puzzlement of the result, I wish to reassess my test score on writing, speaking and listening. It requires band 6.5 to submit a migration request to New Zealand immigration bureau. The scores I got this time are reading (7.5), writing (6), listen (5) and speaking (6), so final score is 6. Which surprise me most is the writing section, which I think I have also done a good job and would be a higher score. Frankly speaking, if I would be rated with 6.5 for writing section then I will obtain a desirable score. Although this was the first time I participated IELTS test, I have prepared it for six months. Actually I spent 4 hours a day to practice all 4 sections. I’m full-time employed and I need to take care of a 2 years old daughter with my wife together. To me it is really a challenge to ensure learning activities, after fulfill the work assignments, household chores and interaction with my baby. In the past days, for writing section every day I at least practiced one essay that relevant to task 1 or task 2. Particularly, I was greatly benefited from many native-English speakers who are active on some language learning website, such as lang-8.com and italki.com. They gave me numerous guidance on essay structures and grammars. I would believe that I have improved a lot. However, I still got 6 in the writing part and this really made me puzzled and frustrated. One thing I also want to explain is that I might wrote a wrong word ‘stuff’, which should be actually ‘staff’ in the writing task one, I believe it was caused by a time pressure. I can’t forgive myself for this, just asking for your understanding here. -to be continueApril 5, 201610
- Writing practice. Look forward to your correction To solve the ever-increasing environmental hazards throughout the world, the best way is to increase the price of fuel. What is your opinion on the above assumption? You should write at least 250 words. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Nowadays the pollution issues are more and more considered by all governments across the world, because if we neglect the ever-increasing trend of environmental hazards then human beings will be dramatically impacted in terms of living conditions and healthy. There are a variety of means need to be utilized to resolve the problem, but not only depends on price policy e.g. increasing the price of fuel. First of all, price measurements are meaningful and usually effectively. They don't cost too much time on making decisions and easily to be implemented by government. Take fuel price as example, a higher fuel price immediately limits the frequency of vehicle usage, which will bring positive effect on reducing polluted gas. In addition to that, if authorities decide to increase the price of other energies then people would consume less of them, therefore less raw materials will be mined and it will directly help to reduce environmental hazards. Secondly, more educational work should be done by governments and related organizations. Most people do not understand fully what could be real impact of their improper daily habit because they were not educated before what are the right behavior and what else are not. For example people tend to ask for plastic bags when they purchasing foods or vegetables at market. Although it brings convenience, plastic bags are critical to environment preservation because of its non-degradable attribute. Moreover, it is vital for authorities to use legal regulations and measures to limit pollution generation by factories, and meanwhile urge them continuously improve their recycling process. Apparently, these kind of efforts will ensure a long term improvement on reducing pollution in the source. In conclusion, price measures like increasing the fuel price are workable, while government should take more aggressive actions to improve people’s awareness on environment preservation, and reduce the pollution from the source, too. Only by those aspects of efforts we will have a more green and sustainable Earth.March 4, 201621
- Writing Practice 0302 To solve the ever-increasing environmental hazards throughout the world, the best way is to increase the price of fuel. What is your opinion on the above assumption? You should write at least 250 words. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Nowadays the pollution issues are more and more considered by all governments across the world, because if we neglect the ever-increasing trend of environmental hazards then human beings will be dramatically impacted in terms of living conditions and healthy. There are a variety of means need to be utilized to resolve the problem, but not only depends on price policy e.g. increasing the price of fuel. First of all, price measurements are meaningful and usually effectively. They don't cost too much time on making decisions and easily to be implemented by government. Take fuel price as example, a higher fuel price immediately limits the frequency of vehicle usage, which will bring positive effect on reducing polluted gas. In addition to that, if authorities decide to increase the price of other energies then people would consume less of them, therefore less raw materials will be mined and it will directly help to reduce environmental hazards. Secondly, more educational work should be done by governments and related organizations. Most people do not understand fully what could be real impact of their improper daily habit because they were not educated before what are the right behavior and what else are not. For example people tend to ask for plastic bags when they purchasing foods or vegetables at market. Although it brings convenience, plastic bags are critical to environment preservation because of its non-degradable attribute. Moreover, it is vital for authorities to use legal regulations and measures to limit pollution generation by factories, and meanwhile urge them continuously improve their recycling process. Apparently, these kind of efforts will ensure a long term improvement on reducing pollution in the source. In conclusion, price measures like increasing the fuel price are workable, while government should take more aggressive actions to improve people’s awareness on environment preservation, and reduce the pollution from the source, too. Only by those aspects of efforts we will have a more green and sustainable Earth.March 2, 201600
练习翻译~ (pt.1) 美国纽约州,比肯
Grande Residences & Academy – Beacon, New York
格兰德公寓及院校 - 美国纽约州,比肯
The Grande Residence community features 150 townhomes. Each is a two-story, multi-bedroom residence with living, dining and lounge areas as well as a garage. Residents enjoy the indigenous art galleries and museums in the city of Beacon, as well as the city’s fine dining and robust selection of international cuisines, crafts and collectibles shops, and festivals.
格兰德公寓社区涵盖150座连栋房屋。每座连栋房屋是两层,多卧室的住宅,有客厅,餐厅,休闲区以及车库。公居民可以享受在比肯市的土著艺术画廊,博物馆,以及不同风物格的特色菜,包含本地特色美食,还有各国佳希肴。也能享受传统工艺品店,收藏店,及节日。
Accessibility: Beacon’s nearest airport (11 miles) is Stewart International Airport (SWF/KSWF), which handles domestic flights to and from certain gateway American cities, including St. Petersburg, Detroit, Orlando, and Philadelphia.
The Metro North Railroad maintains a stop in Beacon, providing access to and from Grand Central Terminal in New York, New York. Highway connections include I-84, NY 9D, and NY 52 Business. Beacon is a 60 mile drive from Manhattan.
易接近(或者可以说交通便利):比肯最附近的飞机场(11英里),是斯图尔特国际机场(SWF/KSWF), 有往返美国某一些城市的国内班机,包括圣彼得堡,底特律,奥兰多,和费城。
地铁北轨在比肯市有车站,让使得往纽约市的大中英车站来去更便捷。连接到高速路有的公路包I-84, NY 9D, and NY 52 Business. 比肯离曼哈顿开车有60英里。
Why Choose Beacon? The three river-side parks, Bowdoin Park (300 acres), Wilcox Park (600 acres) and Quiet Cove Park (25 acres) offer great out-door recreational activities such as biking and hiking along the Dutchess Rail Trail and Harlem Valley Rail Trail.
为什么选择比肯?三个河边的公园,鲍德温公园(300英亩),威尔考克斯公园 (600英亩),海湾公园(25英亩)提供很好的户外活动,例如,随沿着达奇斯铁路步道徒步及哈林谷铁路步道自行车旅游,徒步旅游。0 votedMarch 1, 20160

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