A letter - 20160501

You have some problems in your work and write a letter to a friend for advice. In your letter,

 Outline what you do in your job
 Explain the problems facing you
 Suggest what advice you want to take from your friend

Dear Alex,

I know you are overloaded with your work, but I do need your help and advice about some software programming problems I’m handling now.

As you know, I just got promoted to a new position in my company as a software architect. One of my major responsibilities is to design and write the core software codes for an enterprise fund management system, especially for its database subsystem which requires efficient and robust software algorithms running there.

But the latest performance of my program is not excellent enough, and occasionally there’s system crash.either ("either" could be replaced with "also" but you don't really need either word.)  I tried to improve as much as I can while but I still haven’t managed to tackle correct all critical software bugs so far. Unfortunately I’m exhausted and cannot concentrate on them too much because my bosses just assigned me with some new challenging works.

You have built a remarkable reputation in the software programming sector for your outstanding abilities on coding excellence, and your convincible (I don't know what you mean by "convincible", but it is definitely not the correct word.) experience on being consultant for enormous software giants e.g. Microsoft, google, Alibaba etc, so could you plz help to review the enclosed materials for my design and code and give me some ideas how should I improve their quality and efficiency.

Thank you so much for helping me with this, and you know how important consultancy (the word "consultancy" doesn't make sense) it is for me to not let my boss down!

- You write very well in English.  You have an excellent understanding of English grammar.  Be careful not to use a word you don't completely understand, as you might offend someone.

Kind regards

A letter - 20160501

You have some problems in your work and write a letter to a friend for advice. In your letter,

 Outline what you do in your job
 Explain the problems facing you
 Suggest what advice you want to take from your friend

Dear Alex,

I know you are overloaded with your work, but I do need your help and advice about some software programming problems I’m handling now.

As you know, I just got promoted to a new position in my company as a software architect. One of my major responsibilities is to design and write the core software codes for an enterprise fund management system, especially for its database subsystem which requires efficient and robust software algorithms running there.

But the latest performance of my program is not excellent enough, and (I forgot to tell you that it would be better to say "the system occasionally crashes.") occasionally there’s system crash either. I tried to improve as much as I can while I still haven’t managed to tackle all critical software bugs so far. Unfortunately I’m exhausted and cannot concentrate on them too much because my bosses just assigned me with some new challenging works.

You have built a remarkable reputation in the software programming sector for your outstanding abilities on coding excellence, and your convincible experience on being consultant for enormous software giants e.g. Microsoft, google, Alibaba etc, so could you plz help to review the enclosed materials for my design and code and give me some ideas how should I improve their quality and efficiency.

Thank you so much for helping me with this, and you know how important consultancy to not let my boss down!

Kind regards