some sentenses - 20160509
Just some sentenses, would you plz kindly help me to correct?
Many people may complain that the tax is burden for them, because it reduces their disposable income.
I believe each individual need to pay tax, otherwise a society cannot go well if without the support of taxation.
In contrast, if without a great/healthy public transport system, dwellers will have difficult on commuting, and traffic congestions pose a threat to society efficiency.
For example, in most countries, higher income groups are subject to a higher tax rate, while low income groups can receive subsidy from the state.
In some occasions, people cannot restrict themselves well and are difficult to overcome some bad habits.
For example, governments impose tax on cigarettes and liquids to encourage people to spend less on those categories.
Therefore, people become more healthily and pressure on medical care systems can be also relieved accordingly.
Nevertheless, if people are subject to a high tax rate, they may have no motivation to work hard, and enterprisers are also not willing to set up a business.
To most people, to earn more money is the motivation for them, because it can support them to obtain a better living condition and gain a sense of accomplishment.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that taxation is the lifeblood of one economy, even though a too-high tax rate brings adverse effect to the economy growth.
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some sentenses - 20160509
Just some sentences, would you plz kindly help me to correct?Many people may complain that paying tax is burden for them, because it reduces their disposable income.
I believe each individual needs to pay tax, otherwise a society cannot survive without the support of taxation.
In contrast, if without a great/healthy public transport system, dwellers will have difficulty in commuting, and traffic congestions pose a threat to society's efficiency.
For example, in most countries, higher income groups are subject to a higher tax rate, while low income groups can receive a subsidy from the state.
In some occasions, people cannot restrict themselves well and find it difficult to overcome some bad habits.
For example, governments impose tax on cigarettes and liquor to encourage people to spend less on those items.
Therefore, people become more healthy and pressure on medical care systems can be also relieved accordingly.
Nevertheless, if people are subject to a high tax rate, they may not have motivation to work hard, and entrepreneurs are not willing to set up businesses.
To most people, to earn more money is the motivation for them, because it can support them to obtain a better standard of living and gain a sense of accomplishment.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that taxation is the lifeblood of any economy, even though a too-high tax rate brings adverse effect to the economy growth.
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