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Writing practice. Look forward to your correction To solve the ever-increasing environmental hazards throughout the world, the best way is to increase the price of fuel. What is your opinion on the above assumption? You should write at least 250 words. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Nowadays the pollution issues are more and more considered by all governments across the world, because if we neglect the ever-increasing trend of environmental hazards then human beings will be dramatically impacted in terms of living conditions and healthy. There are a variety of means need to be utilized to resolve the problem, but not only depends on price policy e.g. increasing the price of fuel. First of all, price measurements are meaningful and usually effectively. They don't cost too much time on making decisions and easily to be implemented by government. Take fuel price as example, a higher fuel price immediately limits the frequency of vehicle usage, which will bring positive effect on reducing polluted gas. In addition to that, if authorities decide to increase the price of other energies then people would consume less of them, therefore less raw materials will be mined and it will directly help to reduce environmental hazards. Secondly, more educational work should be done by governments and related organizations. Most people do not understand fully what could be real impact of their improper daily habit because they were not educated before what are the right behavior and what else are not. For example people tend to ask for plastic bags when they purchasing foods or vegetables at market. Although it brings convenience, plastic bags are critical to environment preservation because of its non-degradable attribute. Moreover, it is vital for authorities to use legal regulations and measures to limit pollution generation by factories, and meanwhile urge them continuously improve their recycling process. Apparently, these kind of efforts will ensure a long term improvement on reducing pollution in the source. In conclusion, price measures like increasing the fuel price are workable, while government should take more aggressive actions to improve people’s awareness on environment preservation, and reduce the pollution from the source, too. Only by those aspects of efforts we will have a more green and sustainable Earth.

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Moreover, it is vital for authorities to use legal regulations and measures to limit pollution generatedion by factories, and meanwhile urge them to continuously improve their recycling process. Apparently, these kind of efforts will ensure a long term improvement on reducing pollution in the source.

In conclusion, price measures like increasing the fuel prices are workable, while governments should take more aggressive actions to improve people’s awareness of environment preservation, and reduce the pollution from the source, too. Only by these aspects of efforts we will have a more green and sustainable Earth.

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Nowadays, the pollution issues are more and more considered more and more by all governments across the world., because If we neglect the ever-increasing trend of environmental hazards, then human beings will be dramatically impacted in terms of living conditions and healthy. There are a variety of means that need to be utilized in order to resolve the problem, that depend on more than just but not only depends on price policy e.g. increasing the price of fuel.

First of all, price measurements are meaningful and usually effectively. They don't cost It doesn't take too much time on for governments to makeing decisions and are easily to be implemented by government. Take fuel price as example, a higher fuel price immediately limits the frequency of vehicle usage, which will bring a positive effect on reducing polluted gas. In addition to that, if authorities decide to increase the price of other sources of energyies then people would consume less of them. thTherefore less raw materials will be mined and it will directly help to reduce environmental hazards.

Secondly, more educational work should be done by governments and related organizations. Most people do not fully understand fully what could be the real the true negative impacts of their improper daily actions are habit because they were not educated before about what are the right behaviors and what else are not. For example, people tend to ask for plastic bags when they purchaseing foods or vegetables at the supermarket. Although it brings convenience, plastic bags are critical harmful to the environment preservation because of its they are non-degradable attribute.

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