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Dear Madam Forrest,
Thanks you for your interest in our products. You will find Attached is a sales catalogue with a wide range of equipment for gyms with current pricing.es and sales. In the your last email you asked us for information about gym mats. You will find some gym mats at the in section 3 and others in the section 5. You didn´t clarify if it they would be used to protect for floors protection or to use at aerobics classes, but you will see that we have both options. I don´t think that any mat has been designed as for multipurpose use.
If you have any questions please don´t hesitate to contact me by phone or email.
Regards,__________
Well done!
For the gym mats in section 3 and section 5. If possible, I recommend specifying which type of gym mat is in each section. For example, you could say you will find floor mats located in section 3 and aerobic mats in section 5.-----------------------------------------------
Estimada Sra. Forrest,
Gracias por su interés en nuestros productos. Adjunto le envío el catálogo con una completa
gama de equipamiento para gimnasios con precios y ofertas.
En su correo nos pedía información sobre alfombrillas. Encontrará alguna en la sección 3 y el
resto en la sección 5. No especificó si las alfombrillas eran para proteger suelos, o para
utilizar en clases de aeróbic, pero verá que tenemos ambas opciones. No creo ninguna de
nuestras alfombrillas esté diseñada como multiusos.
Si tiene alguna pregunta, por favor no dude en contactar conmigo por teléfono o por correo
electrónico.
Atentamente,0 votedMarch 28, 20161One day in my life
I wake up at 07:00 am. The first thing I do is washing my face. After that, I have a cup of coffee with milk and some biscuits for breakfast. I leave my house at 07:25 am and I walk to my work, fortunately it takes only 5 or 10 minutes. I start to work at 07:00 am and finish at 03:00 pm. I usually go to have lunch to at the canteen, it is very cheap. In the afternoon, I used to watch some TV series (I try to watch them in English, so I can improve my listening skills), read some books, study English, and running no more than approximately 10 kilometers. and no more. I try to have a healthy life. I usually go to bed early because I like to sleep almost eight hours every night.
Well done!!!
You could also write:
<em>I usually have lunch at the canteen.</em> You don’t need to say I go to have lunch.
<em>...run no more than 10 kilometers.</em> Approximately is implied by indicating that you don’t run more than 10 kilometers.0 votedMarch 23, 20161Summer program
Last week I received my acceptance letter for a summer program from the University of Michigan. I was shaking when I received it because it was something I was very insecure about. I thought my chances to get in were very low. I have been thinking if I'm smart enough to be a participant in that this program or if I really deserve it. I don't feel prepared to talk, to be in conferences or to share thoughts and ideas with the rest of the participants, but I know that if I do it, I will grow up as a student and as a person. I will go with the flow and not pay attention to this fear (you could also say my fear) because this is a great opportunity that and I should take make the best of it.
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Very well done and congrats on your acceptance to the program!
0 votedMarch 22, 20160Today.
It's hard to work on Saturdays. I woke up early, and went to work. Later, I have to go to a restaurant because I play piano there. Actually, I really enjoy to playing the piano despite of I am being a little bit tired. Tomorrow is my day off so I'll be able to spend time with my family. Sometimes we go to a park. Sometimes we just have a barbecue with friends.
I'm still trying to become fluent. I write better than I speak. It's kind of frustrating. I am always looking for better ways to learn English. I think I have to focus on 2 or 3 of them instead of working on all the different ways that I've found on Internet.
Have a nice day!!!Nicely done!
0 votedMarch 20, 20160About my homework: Mommy!
Hi guys! Good afternoon!
Today, I'll write about my homework. My teacher requested that me I write about a member of my family.
I chose write about my mother., Her name is Elisabeth, but many people called her Beth, hers nickname.
She's a beautiful woman.; She is short,; She has 56 years old, and She's got has short dark brown hair and she is tanned.
I guess that she is overweight (she can't know that I saidy it this). Her eyes are black, I love them.
My mommy is a lovely person, smiling, talkative, nice and very pretty!
My mommy is my all, she supports me and since when I was borned, she does has not left me.
I would like to say all reasons why she's important to me but there are many.
Every mothers could be as important!s.Very nicely done!!
0 votedMarch 20, 20161Today : )
Good morning dear friends,
Today I got up later and
I bathed the at 9 am.,
I ate 4 egg whites
and a cup of oatmeal
then I went to work.
At noon I went to pay the electric bill,
then I walked for about 20 min
and had ceviche for lunch. ceviche. The Ceviche
( fish with lemon and spices)
it is a typical dish of from my country Perú.Well done!! Makes me want to have ceviche for dinner though!
0 votedMarch 20, 20161The Stranger. Part 60. "In the dungeon". Please, correct my mistakes
So, we were locked in the a dungeon. I hoped that wasn't a basement under Bridgetown. We just waited.
"Do you think that to move here was the best idea?" I asked.
"I don't know, but when you told me during the phone conversation what was going on in that the city, I understood that we needed to flee (run away? Get away?)" Lisa answered.
"I agree. It was horrible."
"Even if we'll we meet any terrible creatures here, It's better to stay here than to stay there. Blind zombies scare me. We needed to do something. Where were you when we moved to "our world"?"
"I found myself in my flat sitting on the armchair. There was a fantasy book in my hands.. I opened the book and saw Damian and Lisa in the story.. So we are just characters in the fiction tale."
"This explains a lot."
"I'm not Damien. I can't remember my name and my city, but the flat seemed familiar to me"
"Did Have you noticed anything something strange in the flat?"
"No. Everything looked normal usual. Tell me your story. Where were you and what did you do when we were had switched?"
"This is a long story. Get ready to listen" Lisa said____________________________
Well done. I hope my edits are helpful and I did not accidentally change your intent.
0 votedMarch 15, 20161- Hi Dmitry, I think that Angelica answered your question so I will suggest that you may want to reword #3 slightly. I made an attempt while trying to keep what I think is your main intent. I deleted a couple of words (in the) , added a couple and moved one (technologies).. In 1999 the Financial Times said that more POWERFUL microprocessors and further improvements WITH voice devices and other underlying computer "speech" TECHNOLOGIES WILL gradually enable PCs to handle more complex tasks including speech. Hope this is helpful.0 votedMarch 14, 20161
- Hi Joffrey, 1/ You could say “Please remove your hair tie”. 2/ You could say "Please take off your the knot out of your hair". You don’t need the word please to be correct but….:-) 4/This is often referred to as a “shoe rack” My recommendation would be to avoid “ain’t” and say instead “there are no doors” 5/“A package of cookies” is probably more common. 6/ You would "stick" the magnet on. 7/It would be more common to say “We have the entire pool to ourselves.” You will hear people say we’ve got. I personally avoid the use of got whenever possible – especially when writing. Hope this helps!0 votedMarch 11, 20160
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