Summer program
Last week I received my acceptance letter for a summer program from the University of Michigan. I was shaking when I received it because it was something I was very insecure about. I thought my chances to get in were very low. I have been thinking If I'm smart enough to be a participant in that program or If I really deserve it. I don't feel prepared to talk, to be in conferences or to share thoughts and ideas with the rest of the participants, but I know that If I do it, I will grow up as a student and as a person. I will flow and not pay attention to this fear because this is a great opportunity that I should take the best of it.
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Summer Program
Last week I received my acceptance letter for a summer program from the University of Michigan. I was shaking when I received it because it was something I was very insecure unsure about. I thought my chances to of getting in were very low. Recently I have been thinking if whether I'm smart enough to be a participant in that program or if I really deserve it. I don't feel prepared to talk speak or to be in conferences, to share my thoughts and my ideas with everybody the rest of the participants but I know that if I do it, I will grow up as a student and as a person. I will flow and not pay attention to this fear because this is a great opportunity that and I should take make the best most of it.I hope these corrections help, just a pointer there is no need to use Capital I's for if unless it's the start of a sentence.
Congratulations on your acceptance letter and I'm sure you'll be fine over there and like you said you'll grow with this new experience.
Keep up the good work,
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Summer program
Last week I received my acceptance letter for a summer program from the University of Michigan. I was shaking when I received it because it was something I was very insecure about. I thought my chances to get in were very low. I have been thinking if I'm smart enough to be a participant in that this program or if I really deserve it. I don't feel prepared to talk, to be in conferences or to share thoughts and ideas with the rest of the participants, but I know that if I do it, I will grow up as a student and as a person. I will go with the flow and not pay attention to this fear (you could also say my fear) because this is a great opportunity that and I should take make the best of it.
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Very well done and congrats on your acceptance to the program!
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Summer program
Last week I received my acceptance letter for a summer program from the University of Michigan. I was shaking when I received it because it was something that I was very insecure about. I thought my chances to get in were very low. I have been thinking if I'm smart enough to be a participant in that program or if I really deserve it. I don't feel prepared to talk, to be in conferences or to share thoughts and ideas with the rest of the participants at this moment, but I know that if I do it, I will grow up as a student and as a person. I will flow and not pay attention to this fear because this is a great opportunity that I should take the best of it.*****First of all.......Congratulations!!!! Secondly, your English is very good and I feel that once you start immersion into the student life and courses you will be fine!!!! Enjoy your experience, you lucky girl!
I just typed lower case 'I" in your essay for "if" unless you wanted to emphasize the word....then I would have typed everything capital..IF
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