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About my homework: Mommy! Hi guys! Good afternoon! Today, I'll write about my homework. My teacher requested that me write about a member of family. I chose write about my mother, her name is Elisabeth, but many people called her Beth, hers nickname. She's a beautiful woman; She is short; She has 56 years old and She's got short dark brown hair and she is tanned. I guess that she is overweight ( She can't know that I say it). Her eyes are black, i love them. My mommy is a lovely person, smiling, talkative, nice and very pretty! My mommy is my all, she supports me and since when I borned, she does not left me . I would like to say all reasons why she's important to me but there are many. Every mothers could be importants.

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About my homework: Mommy!

Hi guys! Good afternoon!

Today, I'll write about my homework. My teacher requested that I/asked me to write about a member of my family.

I chose to write about my mother, her name is Elisabeth, but many people called her Beth, (hers nickname).
She's a beautiful woman; she is short; she is has 56 years old and she's got has short dark brown hair, and she is tanned.
I guess that she is overweight ( She cadoesn't know that I am saying this/it). Her eyes are black, I love them.
My mommy is a lovely person, smiling, talkative, nice and very pretty!
My mommy is my all, she supports me and since when my birth/I was borned, she does has not left me .
I would like to give/[say] all the reasons why she's important to me but there are many.
Every mothers could be importants.
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About my homework: Mommy!

Hi guys! Good afternoon!

Today, I'll write about my homework. My teacher requested that me I write about a member of my family.

I chose write about my mother., Her name is Elisabeth, but many people called her Beth, hers nickname.
She's a beautiful woman.; She is short,; She has 56 years old, and She's got has short dark brown hair and she is tanned.
I guess that she is overweight (she can't know that I saidy it this). Her eyes are black, I love them.
My mommy is a lovely person, smiling, talkative, nice and very pretty!
My mommy is my all, she supports me and since when I was borned, she does has not left me.
I would like to say all reasons why she's important to me but there are many.
Every mothers could be as important!s.


Very nicely done!!

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About my homework: Mommy!

Hi guys! Good afternoon!

Today, I'll write about my homework. My teacher requested that I write about a member of family.

I chose to write about my mother. Her name is Elizabeth but many people call her Beth, that is her nickname.
She's a beautiful woman; She is short; She is 56 years old and she's got short dark brown hair and she is tanned.
I guess that she is overweight ( She can't know that I'm say this). She also has beautiful black eyes, which I love.
My mommy is a lovely person, always smiling, talkative, nice and very pretty!
My mommy is my everything, she has always supported me and she hasn't left my side since I was born.
I would like to mention all the reasons why she's important to me but there are just too many.
All mothers should be this important/ all mothers are important.
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