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One day in my life
I wake up at 07.00 am. The first thing I do is washing my face. After that I have a cup of coffee with milk and some biscuits for breakfast. I leave my house at 07.25 and I walk to my work, fortunately it takes only 5 or 10 minutes. I start to work at 07.00 am and finish at 03.00 pm. I usually go to have my lunch to at the canteen, because it's is very cheap. In the afternoon, I used to usually watch some TV series/shows (I try to watch them in English, so I improve my listening skills), read some books, study English, running approximately 10 kilometers and no more. I try to have a healthy life. I usually go to bed early because I like to sleep almost eight hours every night.One day in my life
I wake up at 07:00 am. The first thing I do is washing my face. After that, I have a cup of coffee with milk and some biscuits for breakfast. I leave my house at 07:25 am and I walk to my work, fortunately it takes only 5 or 10 minutes. I start to work at 07:00 am and finish at 03:00 pm. I usually go to have lunch to at the canteen, it is very cheap. In the afternoon, I used to watch some TV series (I try to watch them in English, so I can improve my listening skills), read some books, study English, and running no more than approximately 10 kilometers. and no more. I try to have a healthy life. I usually go to bed early because I like to sleep almost eight hours every night.
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You could also write:
I usually have lunch at the canteen. You don’t need to say I go to have lunch.
...run no more than 10 kilometers. Approximately is implied by indicating that you don’t run more than 10 kilometers.
One day in my life
I wake up at 07.00 am. The first thing I do is wash my face. After that I have a cup of coffee with milk and some biscuits for breakfast. I leave my house at 07.25 and I walk to my job, fortunately it takes only 5 or 10 minutes. I start to work at 07.00 am and finish at 03.00 pm. I usually go to have lunch to canteen*, it is very cheap. In the afternoon, I used to watch some TV series (I try to watch them in English, so I improve my listening skill), read some books, study English, running approximately 10 kilometers and no more. I try to have a healthy life. I usually go to bed early because I like to sleep almost eight hours every night.*Is canteen a place? If so the sentence would read: I usually go to Canteen for lunch or I usually have lunch at Canteen.
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