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The Stranger. Part 60. "In the dungeon". Please, correct my mistakes So, we were locked in the dungeon. I hoped that wasn't a basement under Bridgetown. We just waited. "Do you think that to move here was the best idea?" I asked "I don't know, but when you told me during the phone conversation what was going on in that city, I understood that we need to flee (run away? Get away?)" Lisa answered. "I agree. It was horrible." "Even if we'll meet any terrible creatures here, It's better than to stay there. Blind zombies scare me. We needed to do something. Where were you when we moved to "our world"?" "I found myself in my flat sitting on the armchair. There was a fantasy book in my hands.. I opened the book and saw Damian and Lisa in the story.. So we are just in the fiction tale." "This explains a lot." "I'm not Damien. I can't remember my name and my city, but the flat seemed familiar to me" "Have you noticed something strange in the flat?" "No. Everything looked usual. Tell me your story. Where were you and what did you do when we had switched?" "This is a long story. Get ready to listen" Lisa said

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The Stranger. Part 60. "In the dungeon". Please, correct my mistakes

So, we were locked in the a dungeon. I hoped that wasn't a basement under Bridgetown. We just waited.
"Do you think that to move here was the best idea?" I asked.
"I don't know, but when you told me during the phone conversation what was going on in that  the city, I understood that we needed to flee (run away? Get away?)" Lisa answered.
"I agree. It was horrible."
"Even if we'll  we meet any terrible creatures here, It's better to stay here than to stay there. Blind zombies scare me. We needed to do something. Where were you when we moved to "our world"?"
"I found myself in my flat sitting on the armchair. There was a fantasy book in my hands.. I opened the book and saw Damian and Lisa in the story.. So we are just characters in the fiction tale."
"This explains a lot."
"I'm not Damien. I can't remember my name and my city, but the flat seemed familiar to me"
"Did Have you noticed anything something strange in the flat?"
"No. Everything looked normal usual. Tell me your story. Where were you and what did you do when we were had switched?"
"This is a long story. Get ready to listen" Lisa said

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Well done.  I hope my edits are helpful and I did not accidentally change your intent.

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The Stranger. Part 60. "In the dungeon". Please, correct my mistakes

So, we were locked in the dungeon. I hoped that wasn't a basement under Bridgetown. We just waited.
"Do you think that to move here was the best idea?" I asked
"I don't know, but when you told me during the phone conversation what was going on in that city, I understood that we need to flee (run away? Get away?)" Lisa answered.
"I agree. It was horrible."
"Even if we'll meet any terrible creatures here, It's better than to stay there. Blind zombies scare me. We needed to do something. Where were you when we moved to "our world"?"
"I found myself in my flat sitting on the armchair. There was a fantasy book in my hands.. I opened the book and saw Damian and Lisa in the story.. So we are just in the fiction tale."
"This explains a lot."
"I'm not Damien. I can't remember my name and my city, but the flat seemed familiar to me"
"Have you noticed something strange in the flat?"
"No. Everything looked usual. Tell me your story. Where were you and what did you do when we had switched?"
"This is a long story. Get ready to listen" Lisa said.
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This was great! Just don't forget punctuation!

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