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2016年1月18日: 艺术
我在写一篇艺术史方面的文章，觉得很有意思。我的文章是关于在中国当代艺术的中女性的体型问题（关于....的问题 e.g 关于艺术的问题/ 关于你提到的问题/ 关于昨天的问题），女性艺术家怎么用女性体型来表达她们的性别认同的问题。我会评论鉴赏(jian shang)邢丹文、喻红和陈羚羊的艺术品。如果你有机会，你们应该看一看她们的艺术作品！
我在伦敦的时候很喜欢跟我的男朋友去美术馆。其实我不善于谈论艺术，但是我喜欢听其他人的意见。并且我享受美术馆的气氛，觉得很安静，令人鼓舞（not proper here, you might want to express inspired, right? should say: 受到启发，令人鼓舞 is for speech/people's word , and you are inspired, if connect to art/ music/ view, 启发would be better）。Nice job!
you really are good at Chinese writing now
0 votedJanuary 18, 201602016年1月15日: 长大成人
我今天差点忘写我的日记！我为飞机票心事重重(way too formal, better to say我担心我的机票出问题了 "im so worried about my ticket and thought something wrong with my ticket )，很傻的事。昨天我的机票被网站取消了，所以我开始陷入恐慌(too formal, 昨天我的机票被网站突然取消了，我担心的不行 ，xxxxx的不行 means can do something any more, im worried too much and can't worry any more. e.g. 我喜欢的不行，I love it so much and can not love any more )，真是一场恶梦！但是今天我平静下来，终于解决机票/这个问题。
有时我觉得自己是一个成人，可以搞定任何事！有时我觉得自己还是一个小女孩，有问题的时候想跑扑（扑进xxxxxx的怀里）进我的妈妈的怀里。我对我的母亲告诉诉说我的问题以后/我把我的问题告诉我母亲后，心都会舒服一點。按我的意见/我认为（better to use it if you want to express you own opinion），一方面，在外國生活会让人独立一点，长大成人，因为什么事你应该 都只能靠自己来。另一方面，有问题的时候，我们不应该怕求助于人。Chinese writting much better now, really better! 加油
0 votedJanuary 16, 201622016年1月13日: 有一点亏心(亏心means you feel shamed of youself. not sure if that's what you want to express.)
今天我们的全班同学去了实习杭州富阳市受降镇实习，这里日本1945年战败在这里受降，我们看了纪念碑。我很欣赏博物馆的建筑风格。气氛很严肃，尽管我知道这是很重要的事，我承认，对我来说，有一点郁闷，因为在博物馆我读不懂到中文说明文字（读不懂,you can not understand, 读不到/看不到 there is no description words for the pictures），所以只可以能看照片（只可以=you are only allowed to do something. 只能=you can only able to do something），不明白究竟发生了什么发生。我知道我的朋友也觉得这样。我真的要快点提高我的中文水平！
0 votedJanuary 14, 20162- Feel happy that I don't have to learn Chinese By registeration a account on this website, I made some friends for language exchange. I help them with their Chinese about words, characters, expressions and pronounciations, meanwhile, I got their helps of practicing speaking and listening skills. but the more I taught, the happier I am, because I don't have to learn Chinese just like what they do. Even I am a Chinese, their questions sometimes fazed me and I had to think carefully for the answers. I perfer to make a new sentence as example, to help them understand. but I know it's just one out of about thousands usages. So many special usages there await for them to find out and acquire. We got thousands of idioms and phrases, classical Chinese which still be used in our daily life. Chinese language has many different dialects and I, as a Chinese, can understand only one or two. Such a crazy thing I think. For those who want to learn Chinese, don't be scared by my words, Chinese still have grammatical rules and not that diffcult. Steps by steps, you will finally master it one day. I feel lucky that I'm a native speaker. and good luck to you.January 11, 201640
2015年1月6日：夏洛克
我想在月底去日本过假期度假。最初/一开始我还很兴奋，不过我刚才定机票的时候遇到很多困难麻烦，很头痛，令我很烦心/我烦死了/烦死了。
在其他报道中(read from other reports? don't understand. you mean you know these 2 movies from news?)，我今天看了两片部电影：我先/先是跟一个朋友在电脑上看《西游记之大圣归来》，然后跟另外的朋友（if you go with one friend, say: 跟另一个朋友， if with 2 or more friends, say， 跟其他朋友）去电影院看《神探夏洛克：可恶的新娘》！
《西游记之大圣归来》的动画画做（it's couputer CG, so we use 做，ex,游戏画面做得很漂亮，if it's a painting, use 画，ex， 这幅画画得很漂亮）得很漂亮，觉得孙悟空太酷（太酷了/真酷）！
其实我不公开很少跟别人说 “我喜欢看《神探夏洛克》”，而且不喜欢和夏洛克迷 /夏洛克粉丝(fans?) 交往（交往sometimes means start a realationship as BF and GF, for normal friend, or common social relations, we use 打交道，ex。我不喜欢跟你打交道，你很讨厌。），觉得他们太痴迷狂热/疯狂/痴狂，有一点难为情，哈哈。这片(question: 片 is wrong, what should we use? )电影一般，还好（a comma is needed here, it will be better），但是我觉得导演成了很放纵太自以为是。他们知道他们的电视剧现在很热门，所以成了自负有点太不认真了。(you think the director is kind of big-headed, and they know people will watch it, nomatter the movie is good or not, so they didn't do his best, as a result is not as good as our expectations. right? )0 votedJanuary 7, 20162- There maybe culture difference, but people are much the same. At the begining of learning English, I've been told that culture difference is very improtant, and about that I have no doubt in my mind. So many countries in our world, so many people there, rigorous German, passionate American, polite Japnese and hard-working Chinese,etc., we awalys have different stereotypes to people from other locations. Yes, people from different countries are different, that's right and I can't agree any more. But after years of language learning, I realize that everyone is alike. Men love to talk about women and sex, and women enjoy talking make up. It's simply a metaphor but it's ture. Just because of the educations, environments, backgrounds that our wolrd is clorful and vigorous. Everybody think they are the best, nobody around him can beat him. They have talents but just nobody can find out, that's why he looks so ordinary to people around him. Everybody want a comfortable and wealthy lives, maybe not rich, but carefree. No need to walk with the boring clients while working, quit the job at any time they want if they don't like, even to buy anything they like without too much considerations of bills coming next week. Kids want to be a superhero, girls dream her Mr.Right, the olds love children and travel. People in their different ages have various, but the same demands. we always want distinguish us from others, in fact the rest us are doing the same thing. Chiese regard foreigner as well educated group, who is able to come to China should be very rich, polite or smart. Not until we one day find a foreigner run red light, just like us, did we realize they are same like us influenced by the envionment. Chinese people stay in the long queue insteady of jumping the queue when they travel overseas, as they find out everybody is following the rules (I know still few can not follow). As a result, I agree with the cultural diversification, but people are all the same, share one world, have a normal life.January 7, 201630
生日学习
弟弟的十八岁生日，你会买什么礼物给他？
我会买游戏机和唱片。我还会买给他新的钱包，可能黑色或者蓝色的，因为他喜欢那些颜色。我还会给他买新的钱包 ex: 给你买游戏机/ 给爸爸买个新钱包。‘买给他’ usually there is no object after it. ex. A ASK:这钱包是买给谁的？ B ANSWER: 买给他的。
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你们会做什么？
我们会带他去比萨斜塔饭店吃饭。然后，我们跟他的朋友一起回家吃生日蛋糕和打电脑游戏。派对以后，我会跟妹妹一起帮助妈妈收拾房间，吸尘，擦地板等。EXCELLENT!! in my opinion, this part is understandable and no mistakes.
0 votedJanuary 5, 201632016年1月4日：污染程度
我今天早上看窗外的时候见到我以为是一场雾，但是之后发现原来是污染！
我今天早上向窗外看的时候，见到 我以为是一场雾，但是之后发现原来是污染！
向...看 ex: 向屋外看/向前面看
same structures: 往...看/ 朝....看
真可怕！我不想知道今天污染程度，宁对这件事一无所知，
真可怕！我不想知道今天污染程度有多少，宁对这件事一无所知，
不过在微信朋友圈看到一个帖子，谈论污染程度多么高。
不过（我）在微信朋友圈看到一个帖子，谈论污染程度有多么高。
下午的污染程度是３５０，在人体健康构成危害的类。
下午的污染程度是３５０，在 达到对人体健康构成危害的程度了 类 。（/已经对人体健康构成危害了）
我想我应该买一个口罩，没有想到污染的问题是多么严重。很想念英国的清洁空气！
我想我应该买一个口罩，没有想到污染的问题是多这么严重/有这么严重。很想念怀念英国的清洁空气！
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