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(If there are something wrong in my English, please let me konw :) )大家好！
大家好！我叫孙凤梅。我来自越南，我是越南人。我非常喜欢学习中文。我在i talk找朋友一起说中文。我说英文说得很好。我有IELTS Band 8.5(我的雅思成绩是8.5)。我现在在Webster大学学习。Webster大学是一个（所）美国的大学。所以我可以叫（教）你们英文。叫（教）我中文吧！我真的喜欢说中文，可是我没有中国的朋友。有一天，我一定去中国参观。
In general, your Chinese is quite good~
0 votedDecember 5, 20151yellow part: Where I think not good enough
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(If there are something wrong in my English, please let me konw :) )下雨的日子...
这几天一直在下鱼(雨).
一天会下三四次.
我不喜欢下雨的声音. 我不知道为什么但是雨的声音给我一个（种， 一种感觉 a kind of feeling）很不舒服的感觉.（ 雨的声音给你一种很不舒服的感觉就是为什么你不喜欢下雨的声音，哈哈）
但是有雨是一个好消息. 很多月了有阴霾（阴霾 or 雾霾？ 雾霾持续了很多个月）,要出去都很辛苦.（It is understandable, but 出去的话会很辛苦 may be better）
希望一个好天气会快到(快点到来 is better here， will coming soon, In Chinese, future tense seems always be leave out...)~ (*≧▽≦)/0 votedNovember 5, 20153yellow part: Where I think not good enough
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(If there are something wrong in my English, please let me konw :) )你好!(For there is a "大家好" below, "你好" can be deleted. "你" is a part of "大家")
大家好!
我的明之(名字)叫黄佩君(Good name!)...今年二十二岁.
我是学生. 我的专业是市场营销.
我觉得华文(although "华文" is ok, "中文" is much more widely used)有一点难学应为(因为)很难记得(记忆 is better here..."记得" seems not wrong, but it is wired here. "记得" always used to decorate something to do or some event, "记忆" should be used when you means remember knowledge in my opinion).
很想("希望" is better)有一天我会读中文.
希望多多指教!Good job~Enjoy Chinese~
0 votedNovember 5, 20154yellow part: Where I think not good enough
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(If there are something wrong in my English, please let me konw :) )第一课
大家好。我是gino. 这个是我的第一课。我是意大利语老师， 但是我住在巴西。(但是 means but, I don't think a Italian teacher lived in Brazil is strange, haha, so... may be "但是" is rebundant.) 我真想学习汉语， 可没有很多空。(It's ok, but a bit wierd...I think 没有太多空闲时间 or 没什么空（more spoken) may be better) 然而我的梦（梦想 is better, both 梦想 and 梦 mean wishful thinking or ideal, but 梦 also means ...er...the things you see when you are sleeping (Oh my poor English...)）是又找工作又活着在中国（在中国工作、生活）。我喜欢中国文化。 我也喜欢读书，听音乐，看电影。汉语很难! 谢谢! 再见。
Generally speaking, you did a good job in your first lesson! Chinese is not so hard as you think, keep holding on~
0 votedNovember 4, 20153yellow part: Where I think not good enough
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(If there are something wrong in my English, please let me konw :) )今天的课和(以及, "和" is ok, but "以及" is better here)(我的)工作。
大家好，我在今天晚上的课里学习了《茶馆》的中文（I'm not sure what do you want to express for "茶馆" here. Do you mean the article named 《茶馆》or the tea house, the building people drink tea in it?）。 有些的生词是‘看法’ ，手指 和添 （有意思！)。（我学到了一些有意思的生词-- “看法”， “手指” 和 “舔” I think you want to express "some interesting new words I have learnt"）我也学习了（一些 means some）有意思的语法。 比如，从生词叫看法我用句子(含有生词“看法”的例句是 The sample sentence contains "看法" is)‘ 我对澳大利亚的看法是他们喜欢用手指吃食物（用手拿食物吃， take something to eat by hand）。’ 别的生词是‘添(另一个生词是 舔，This character is 舌+忝)。 比如说，我喜欢添了盘子干净（我喜欢把盘子舔干净 I like to lick up all the things in the plate） 。
关于我的工作！
我在悉尼澳大利亚(澳大利亚悉尼 Country, then City)(职业是 My job)是英语老师！ 我给各种各样的国人(各国人 The word “国人” in Chinese means the Chinese citizen, so 各种各样的国人 means the variety Chinese citizen, but "各国人" means people from different countries)教英语。 那的学生从韩国，中国， 和 法国（我的学生来自韩国、中国和法国 When you want to express "comes from", use “来自” rather than "从"）。他们去澳大利亚到学习英语（他们到澳大利亚学习英语 去 means go to, 到 means have being at some place），因为他们想去澳洲（的）大学（"澳洲大学" means Australia University, "澳洲的大学" means Australian universities）。
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