Raining Outside

It's raining outside now, so I couldn't work out at the park... So tomorrow I am going to work out twice as hard.

지금 밖에 비가와요. 그래서 공원에서 운동할 수 없었어요...그래서 내일 오늘 운동해야 할 것 만큼 내일 할 예정이에요.

*Good job!

Hello

Hello, I am a Chinese girl and my name is Ruby. I'll be attending a university in Sepember. I’m looking forward to university life. Soon after the term starts, I will be doing military traning. But, I am a bit scared.
I want to look for a pen pal to learn English well. If you want to learn Chinese, I can teach you.

*Good job! And good luck at college!

The Summer Music Festival

Last week, I went a summer music festival called "ROCK IN JAPAN 2015" with my friends. There were many, many people who love music! I was really excited just being there.

I saw some music bands there. I was especially excited to see KANA-BOON, a band that I love, perform. The audience was dancing and singing. I also danced and sang. I was all sweaty, but I didn't mind.
BUNP OF CHICKEN impressed me the most out of all the bands I saw that day. It is my favorite band. Though I have been listening to their songs since I was little, I'd never seen them perform in real life. Thus, I was touched. I was moved to tears. I really thought "this is the life"!

I was tired, but it was very fun. I really had a great time. I will never forget this day.

*Great job! And I'm glad you had such a good time at the concert!

A lucky day

I usually go to work by bike, but today was different. Suddenly, when I was ready leave home, it began to rain heavily.
I thought if I left a few minutes early I would get soaked and look like a drowned rat, ha ha... 
So instead I went to the company by bus, and I arrived there just in time.Whew! That was a close call.
What a lucky day!

*Great job! - Nicole

Please check my English to explain the early life of a Japnaese writer.

I am trying to explain the early life of Toson Shimazaki, a Japanese novelist . Could you fix my explanations if there are any mistakes or sentences you don't understand.?




After graduating from his university, Toson started working as an English teacher at a women's college. Soon after he began teaching, he started to like one of his students. Unfortunately, she already had a fiancé chosen for her by her parents. So, it was unrequited love. He could not even reveal his true feelings to her. Love between a teacher and a student was much more controversial in those days (although it is still considered controversial today). Feeling kind of guilty, he left his school.
Later, he confessed his love by asking a friend to express his feelings to her on his behalf. Though she had good feelings toward Toson, their relationship was not fruitful. She eventually married another man. She became pregnant after that, but she died due to severe morning sickness. So Toson’s first attempt at love was completely unsuccessful.

*Good job, your English is great! - Nicole

What is your favourite food? Where do you often eat?

Everybody loves to eat, because food provides us with energy and nutrition to maintain our lives.
As for me, I can eat many kinds of foods. However, I have a special liking for Japanese food, especially sushi.
It is a traditional food of Japan and is currently a popular favourite around the world. It is very healthy and nutritious. Ingredients for this food include special rice from Japan, seaweed, vegetables and raw fresh fish or seafood. It is rich in protein, contains vitamins and omega 3s, and is low in calories and cholesterol. Therefore it is suitable for those who want to lose weight or diet. One of the useful qualities of this food is that it can be effective at preventing heart disease.

I have eaten at many Japanese restaurants. However, based upon my experience, Thien Que Sushi on 3A Ton Duc Thang Street is the place I love the best due to its beautiful space, nice service, delicious foods, and good prices. If you are interested in Japanese food, you should stop by there to see how delicious its Japanese food is.

In addition, this food is better with wasabi, sour ginger and soy sauce, and therefore it is not for those who are unable to eat spicy food.

*Great job! Your English is very good! - Nicole