Please check my English to explain the early life of a Japnaese writer.

I am trying to explain the early life of Toson Shimazaki, a Japanese novelist . Could you fix my explanations if there are any mistakes or sentences you don't understand.?




After graduating from his university, Toson started working as an English teacher at a women's college. Soon after he began teaching, he started to like one of his students. Unfortunately, she already had a fiancé chosen for her by her parents. So, it was unrequited love. He could not even reveal his true feelings to her. Love between a teacher and a student was much more controversial in those days (although it is still considered controversial today). Feeling kind of guilty, he left his school.
Later, he confessed his love by asking a friend to express his feelings to her on his behalf. Though she had good feelings toward Toson, their relationship was not fruitful. She eventually married another man. She became pregnant after that, but she died due to severe morning sickness. So Toson’s first attempt at love was completely unsuccessful.

*Good job, your English is great! - Nicole