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The Hanayashiki August the 11th and 12th. It's still hot in the daytime. Yesterday, my friend and I went to the Hanayashiki that is the oldest amusement park in Japan. It's a small park that's been built in the midst of residential district in Asakusa. We rode the old roller coaster that 60 years old! It was so scary in many ways... Then, we stayed overnight in a hotel and talked all night! Today, I went to work from there. I really wanted to take the day off from work again...

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The Hanayashiki

August 11th and 12th.
It's still hot in the daytime.

Yesterday, my friend and I went Hanayashiki, the oldest amusement park in Japan.
It's a small park that was built in the midst of a residential district in Asakusa. We rode the old roller coaster, which is 60 years old! It was so scary in many ways...
Then, we stayed overnight in a hotel and talked all night!

Today, I went from there to work. I really wanted to take the day off from work again...

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Yesterday, my friend and I went to the Hanayashiki, the oldest amusement park in Japan. It's a small park that was built in the midst of a residential district in Asakusa. We rode the old roller coaster that's over 60 years old! It was so scary! Afterwards, we stayed overnight in a hotel and talked all night long! Today, I went straight to work, from the hotel. I really wanted to take the day off again...

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The Hanayashiki

August the 11th and 12th.
It's still hot in the daytime.

Yesterday, my friend and I went to the Hanayashiki, that which is the oldest amusement park in Japan.
It's a small park that's been built in the midst of a residential district in Asakusa. We rode the oldest roller coaster that is 60 years old! It was so scary in many ways...
Then, we stayed overnight in a hotel and talked all night!

Today, I went to work from there. I really wanted to take the day off from work again...

 

Your English is very good!! Keep up the hard work :-) 

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Your English is very good!
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Wow! That's good sound. I also want to go to this place. I'll enjoy everything that you said. ^^

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