The Summer Music Festival
Last week, I went a summer music festival named "ROCK IN JAPAN 2015" with my friends. There are many many people who love music! I was really excited just being there.
I saw some music bands there. Especially, I was so excited when I was seeing the performance KANA-BOON who is a band I love. Audiences were dancing and singing. I was also doing that together. I was all sweat but I didn't mind that.
BUNP OF CHICKEN was most impressed me in all bands I saw in that day. They are my most favorite band. Though I have been listening to their songs since I was little, I'd never seen their performance in reality. Thus I was touched all the better. I was moved to tears. I really thought this is life!
I was tired but it was very fun. I really had a great time. I will never forget this day.
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The Summer Music Festival
Last week, I went a summer music festival called "ROCK IN JAPAN 2015" with my friends. There were many, many people who love music! I was really excited just being there.
I saw some music bands there. I was especially excited to see KANA-BOON, a band that I love, perform. The audience was dancing and singing. I also danced and sang. I was all sweaty, but I didn't mind.
BUNP OF CHICKEN impressed me the most out of all the bands I saw that day. It is my favorite band. Though I have been listening to their songs since I was little, I'd never seen them perform in real life. Thus, I was touched. I was moved to tears. I really thought "this is the life"!
I was tired, but it was very fun. I really had a great time. I will never forget this day.
*Great job! And I'm glad you had such a good time at the concert!
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Also, awesome. Glad you had fun.
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