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    What happen with me ?

    What happen with me ?
    I don't understand why I feel sad, sometimes I'm so happy. I want to make things to be different. and Sometimes I just want to cry and I view everything as negative around to me.
    Maybe I feel bad because I don't have friends or because sometimes I feel that I cannot to study to distance and I want to study and a normal university (I don't understand what you want to say here. If you explain it more I can help you!) or simply because I feel sad without any reason.
    Or the thyroid affects me because I have hypothyroidism. and Maybe I should to make a medical appointment.
    I hope that I can to feel good. ("I hope that I will feel better" sounds better! I hope you feel better too!!)
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    September 11, 2016
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    email

    Dear Mr Stark
    I am writing this email to apply for the post position offered in the advertisement on 7th September 7th, in which you demand a for a barista to work in a coffee shop.
    I graduated in social work at the University of Valencia in 2008. Furthermore, I have additional formation training related to how to deal with people. Regarding my language skills, not only do I have I the CAE in English but also a B2 level in French.
    I have three years of work experience in a restaurant for three years, where I was in charge of a team group of 4 people. I also worked in a coffee area in Manchester for 2 years where I was responsible for the choice of different coffees and alhoholic drinks. (I'm not sure what you mean by "coffee area" or what choosing coffee and drinks entails. Where did you work?)
    I am very polite and hard-working so I think I would be a good candidate for the post position (I prefer the word position here, but maybe they say post in England??) offered. I am interested in this position because I love dealing with costumers customers, cooking, and working in a demanding atmosphere. and, Besides this, I am a good team player so I get on with my workmates. This post job could provide me a good possibility to improve my language skills.
    I would like to know whether it is a part-time or full-time job. ("Whether" implies more than one option.)
    I have attached my CV with extended information but in case you should you require further information do not hesitate to ask for it and I would be very grateful to provide it or attend an to interview in with your company.
    I look forward to hearing from you.
    Yours sincerely
    Lorena
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    September 11, 2016
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    How I met you mother - last episode

    Hi guys!

    What did you think about HIMYM's last episode? I just finished watching it and I'm astounded! I never imagined that the mother was dead!!

    It's seems for me like a huge authors' mistake. I researched did some research and found out that the final last two minutes were recorded by at the end of the third season, then the authors decided to keep with the plan of Robin and Ted to be together... but there was so much chemistry between Robin and Barney that it just doesn't didn't feel right!

    I believe the author never thought the show would last for such a long period.... the problem is that, with the time passing, lots of things has changed to for the audience, in terms of how we see each of the characters... Barney was supposed to begin and end up as a jerk, but he evolved. The authors tried to create something with his daughter, but I don't think it worked.

    But trying to look at the half glass half full (this isn't quite phrased right, but I can't think of the right way), it seems Ted and Tracy weren't meant to be together.... I mean, it was clear that Ted wasn't Tracy's soulmate. Instead, Tracy's soulmate was her first fiance (who died in an accident). Following this idea, I believe the author tried to show that Ted's soulmate wasn't Tracy either: it was Robin, actually. But the problem is that they spent on a whole season with Barney & Robin's wedding only to end up blowing everything? Common Come on!!

    Maybe the show should have been finished by the end of the sixth or seventh season, when Barney and Robin first saw they weren't meant to be together!!

    I heard that the authors are preparing some "How I Met Your Father" show.... let's see! I doubt it will be as good as How I Met Your Mother!

    See you!!
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    August 15, 2016
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    He is a geek.

    He is committed and flexible to the circumstances (what kind of circumstances? New circumstances??). His technical and academic continuous formation (I'm not sure what you mean by formation. His continued education in technology?) in addition to his experience in different environments enables him to attack projects in technologically diverse areas: systems, communications, software development or of and infrastructures. He is versatile, able and persevering.
    He is a consultant, an analyst, a programmer, He is administrating administrates Windows networks. He feels comfortable as new Technologies department's director's in the medium-sized Enterprise.

    He has a wide formation diverse education (or background?) and many years of experience to direct a department of new technologies with minimum costs and scarce resources. He can analyze complex processes to simplify and to implement them. He possess the necessary intuition to preview previsualize the problems and to antedate create (or something like that) their solutions, to manage and to administer resources, to negotiate with clients and providers and to market (to sell) technological products. Those are his qualities and strengths.

    Please, can you correct to me ?
    Thank you.


    just a few minor things! If you are using the word "formation" in regards to education, just saying "education" is better. 

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    August 15, 2016
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    Self introducing speech - help

    Hi guys! I'm trying to prepare a self-introductory  speech and I would like some help to check the wording. By the way, the help is useful for this first sentence too ;)

    I'm Armando Alves, born and raised in Sao Paulo, Brazil. I'm 32 years old, married with a fabulous wife Juliana. My father was born in Portugal but he was raised in Brazil (he came to Brazil when he was 7 years old). My mother was born in Brazil and met my father here. I'm the oldest of the three kids they had. I have two sisters: Amanda and Alessandra. My dad is a retired engineer, my mom is a homemaker, my sister Amanda is a Physical Therapist and my younger sister Alessandra is a lawyer.

    Talking about my educational history, In 2008 I got my masters in Mechanical Engineering from one of the best Brazilian Engineering Colleges, located in Sao Paulo.In 2014 I got a masters in Business Administration (MBA) from a University in Sao Paulo. Also in 2014 I got a certificate in Business Strategy from the University of La Verne-CA, after spending one amazing month in California.

    With more than 10 years' experience working for big multinational companies as Bosch, Voith, ABB and General Electric (my current company), I work as a Procurement and Sourcing Manager for the GE's Energy Connections division, which consists in the business is responsible for manufacturing systems and equipment for energy's transmission and distribution. At work I'm focused on both helping people as much as I can and doing my best every day! Maybe the receipt (I don't know what you mean by this. Maybe the secret, or recipe??) is working on something that you really love!

    I'm absolutely passionate by about engineering, cars and sports. I have played soccer since I was 6, even though I'm not exactly a class player (i don't know what a "class player" is, but I also know nothing about soccer so maybe it makes sense.). My strength in sports was always my focus on how I can could contribute better to the team. Engineering for me is not only my job, but is also a hobby. Understanding how everything works is always a pleasant activity! Talking about cars (I think something else would work better here, like "in regards to my interest in cars" or "As far as cars go", something like that), I really love the classic cars! In fact, I did made completed a classic car project in 2015! I restored our 30 years old Volksvagen Santana which now looks like a brand new car! By the way, (this "by the way" isn't necessary. Sounds better with out it) I attached a picture of the restored car!

    Well, this a little bit about me! Let me know what you think! Thank you! (I just think it sounds more confident without "well")


    Just a couple very minor errors, and some suggestions! Good luck with your speech! 

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    August 15, 2016
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    Querido Juan Juan, No sé qué pasa. Tengo un sentimiento malo en la barriga. Normalmente me dudo cuando esto me ocurre, y trato de convencerme que es todo en mi mente. Pero me lo va surgiendo, en una manera demasiada conocida, como cuando estuve con mi ex, el mentiroso. Y, como ya lo sabes, en aquella época, lo acertí. Lo que pasa es que siento que no quieres, o mejor dicho, es obvio que algo o alguien en tu vida está llamándote la atención más que yo. Y bueno. Estamos de lejos. Nunca nos prometimos nada. Nunca estuvimos muy claro. Pero lo que no me gusta es la idea de que no me estás siendo muy abierto o totalmente honesto. No me cuentas mucho de tu vida, ni de qué estás pensando ni como te sientes. Te demoras tanto cada vez que te hago una pregunta, y cuando (o si) me contestas, es muy de encima y me queda con la impresión que estás evitando u omitiendo algo. ¿¿Y por qué?? Esto ha pasado lo suficiente veces que, aunque espera que no vayas a hacerlo, he empezado a esperarlo, y me desilusiona cada vez más. No sé por qué actúas así. No creo que me meta excesivamente en tu vida, ni que soy muy cansón. No te entiendo. Pero bueno. Haz lo que quieras. No sé cómo es tu vida, y supongo que, por cualquier razón, no quieras que yo sepa. Resulta que hay un hueco. No puedo saber qué queda en él, a parte de preguntas sin respuestas y dudas. Es que escondes algo, estás demasiado distraído y no prestas mucha atención, ya no quieres compartir conmigo, o no eres capaz de hacerlo. No sé. Pero cualquiera que sea la razón, no importa mucho. Todas las opciones apestan y me dejan sentir igual. Me hace que no pueda tener confianza en ti completamente. En estos momentos estoy pensándolo más de lo que quiero, y me molesta demasiado. Me tiene toda estresada y confundida. No quiero sentirme así. Yo sé que whatsapp no es el mejor medio de comunicación y hay muchas oportunidades de entender mal, pero de todos modos he acabado sentiendo que te he dado mucho y no recibo bastante de regreso. No me respondes mucho. No me compartes mucho. Es como si hubieras perdido el interés. Estoy triste. Frustrada. Mis sentimientos están heridos. ¿Qué pasa?
    July 7, 2016
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    I'm not really sure because it's not a very common phrase, but I imagine that it means something like "consideration."
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    April 24, 2016
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    "people who dosen't work has have a better life~" when I finished this easay, I really wanted to resign!!

    Although work is one of the most important part of people's lives, I believe that life could be meaningful without a satisfying career.

    The people who do not have jobs will pay more attention to their families. Without a job, the fathers will spend more times to communicate communicating with their children, and the mothers can take care of their babies more carefully as well. As a result, the people who do not work will have mor happier family time in their life. Beside that, if the people work for less time, they will get have more times to learn and expand their hobbies, which can broaden their horizons. For example, they can travel all around world, communicate with different people and get a better understanding of life. Similarly, they can further their study when they do not work. For instance, a wide range of housewives could take a part in some training course, such as writing course, painting course and some instrument courses. At last, if the people do not have jobs, they will be more optimistic. Since there is fierce competition in the job market, people always feel heavy pressure in their working times when they are at work. On the contrary, people who do not work will feel more comfortable and have a better temper. If they have to work over time everyday to achieve their career goalds, they will be too tired to talk with their families with patient patience at home. And the endless work also makes people feel hopeless and be negative to their life.

    Therefore, I believe that without a satisfying career, people can still have a wonderful life.
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    April 21, 2016
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    Is.
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    April 21, 2016
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    ex novio En Junio pasado, me enteré que mi novio no fue fiel. Él había sido me engañaba por todo nuestro relación. Desde entonces descubrí ese, mi vida no ha sido fácil. He tomado un rato difícil creyendo que cualquiera es buena, y digno de confianza. Hasta mis amigos más cercanos parecían que no podían ser confiables. Nunca antes me había sucedido algo tan desgarrador. Le amé más que nunca había amado nadie en mi vida entera. Lo que más confuso es que ahora no sé como saber que es la verdad. Me sentí con él una conexión pura de la corazón. Nunca me había sentido como ese. Pero después de tres años supe que él es un mentiroso y hizo cosas incontables herirme. Pues, ¿qué fueron esos sentimientos que me sentí? Ahora, después de ocho meses, el corazón está mejor, pero todavía un poco rato. Le extraño algo, pero yo sé que soy mejor sin él. Tambien, en realidad tengo suerte, porque el junio que viene, planeo empezar un gran viaje por todo el mundo. Si él ha sido fiel, este viaje no habría ocurrido. Estoy emocionada por el futuro, y espero que yo vaya aprender confiar en alguien de nuevo.
    February 2, 2015
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