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email Dear Mr Stark I am writing this email to apply for the post offered in the advertisement on 7th September in wich you demand a barista to work in a coffee shop. I graduated in social work at University of Valencia in 2008. Furthermore, I have additional formation related to how to deal with people. Regarding my language skills, not only have I the CAE in English but also a B2 level in French. I have work experience in a restaurant for three years, where I was in charge of a team group of 4 people. I also worked in a coffee area in Manchester for 2 years where I was responsible for the choice of different coffees and alhoholic drinks. I am very polite and hard-working so I think I would be a good candidate for the post offered. I am interested in this position because I love dealing with costumers, cooking and working in a demanding atmosphere and, besides this, I am a good team player so I get on with my workmates. This post could provide me a good possibility to improve my language skills. I would like to know whether is a part-time job. I attach my CV with extended information but in case should you require further information do not hesitate to ask for it and I would be very grateful to provide it or attend an interview in your company. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely Lorena

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Dear Mr Stark
I am writing this email to apply for the post position offered in the advertisement on 7th September 7th, in which you demand a for a barista to work in a coffee shop.
I graduated in social work at the University of Valencia in 2008. Furthermore, I have additional formation training related to how to deal with people. Regarding my language skills, not only do I have I the CAE in English but also a B2 level in French.
I have three years of work experience in a restaurant for three years, where I was in charge of a team group of 4 people. I also worked in a coffee area in Manchester for 2 years where I was responsible for the choice of different coffees and alhoholic drinks. (I'm not sure what you mean by "coffee area" or what choosing coffee and drinks entails. Where did you work?)
I am very polite and hard-working so I think I would be a good candidate for the post position (I prefer the word position here, but maybe they say post in England??) offered. I am interested in this position because I love dealing with costumers customers, cooking, and working in a demanding atmosphere. and, Besides this, I am a good team player so I get on with my workmates. This post job could provide me a good possibility to improve my language skills.
I would like to know whether it is a part-time or full-time job. ("Whether" implies more than one option.)
I have attached my CV with extended information but in case you should you require further information do not hesitate to ask for it and I would be very grateful to provide it or attend an to interview in with your company.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
Lorena

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