"people who dosen't work has a better life~" when I finished this easay, I realy want to resign!!
Although work is one of the most important part of people's lives, I believe that life could be meaningful without satisfying career.
The people who do not habe job will pay more attention to their families. Without a job, the fathers will spend more times to communicate with their children, and the mothers can take care of their babies mor carefully as well. As a result, the people who do not work will have mor happer family time in their life. Beside that, if the people work for less time, they will get more times to learn and expand their hobbies, which can broaden their horizons. For example, they can travel all around world, communicate with different people and get a better understanding of life. Similarly, they can further their study when they do not work. For instance, a wide range of housewives take a part in some training course, such as writing course, painting course and some instrument courses. At last, if the people do not have job, they will be more optimistic. Since there is fierce competition in the job market, people always feel heavy pressure in their working times. On the contrary, people who do not work will feel more comfortable and have a better temper. If they have to work over time everyday to achieve their career goalds, they will be too tired to talk with their families with patient at home. And the endless work also makes people feel hopeless and be negative to their life.
Therefore, I believe that without satisfying career, people can still have a wonderful life.
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"people who dosen't work has have a better life~" when I finished this easay, I really wanted to resign!!
Although work is one of the most important part of people's lives, I believe that life could be meaningful without a satisfying career.The people who do not have jobs will pay more attention to their families. Without a job, the fathers will spend more times to communicate communicating with their children, and the mothers can take care of their babies more carefully as well. As a result, the people who do not work will have mor happier family time in their life. Beside that, if the people work for less time, they will get have more times to learn and expand their hobbies, which can broaden their horizons. For example, they can travel all around world, communicate with different people and get a better understanding of life. Similarly, they can further their study when they do not work. For instance, a wide range of housewives could take a part in some training course, such as writing course, painting course and some instrument courses. At last, if the people do not have jobs, they will be more optimistic. Since there is fierce competition in the job market, people always feel heavy pressure in their working times when they are at work. On the contrary, people who do not work will feel more comfortable and have a better temper. If they have to work over time everyday to achieve their career goalds, they will be too tired to talk with their families with patient patience at home. And the endless work also makes people feel hopeless and be negative to their life.
Therefore, I believe that without a satisfying career, people can still have a wonderful life.
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