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He is a geek. He is committed and flexible to the circumstances. His technical and academic continuous formation in addition to his experience in different environments enables him to attack projects in technological diverse areas: systems, communications, software development or of infrastructures. He is versatile, able and persevering. Hi is a consultant, an analyst, a programmer, Hi is administrating Windows networks. Hi feel comfortable as new Technologies department's director's in the medium-sized Enterprise. Hi has a wide formation and many years of experience to direct a department of new technologies with minimum costs and scarce resources. Hi can analyze complex processes to simplify and to implement them. Hi possess the necessary intuition to preview the problems and to antedate the solution, to manage and to administer resources, to negotiate with clients and providers and to market (to sell) technological products. Those are him qualities and strengths. Please, can you correct to me ? Thank you.

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He is a geek.

He is committed and flexible to the circumstances (what kind of circumstances? New circumstances??). His technical and academic continuous formation (I'm not sure what you mean by formation. His continued education in technology?) in addition to his experience in different environments enables him to attack projects in technologically diverse areas: systems, communications, software development or of and infrastructures. He is versatile, able and persevering.
He is a consultant, an analyst, a programmer, He is administrating administrates Windows networks. He feels comfortable as new Technologies department's director's in the medium-sized Enterprise.

He has a wide formation diverse education (or background?) and many years of experience to direct a department of new technologies with minimum costs and scarce resources. He can analyze complex processes to simplify and to implement them. He possess the necessary intuition to preview previsualize the problems and to antedate create (or something like that) their solutions, to manage and to administer resources, to negotiate with clients and providers and to market (to sell) technological products. Those are his qualities and strengths.

Please, can you correct to me ?
Thank you.


just a few minor things! If you are using the word "formation" in regards to education, just saying "education" is better. 

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