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for a long time , 13 years I worked (This is written awkwardly) I've worked 13 long years.  finally last year when I was working at In Apple (the biggest company in the world) I got I really don't like my job (I'm not sure what you're trying to say?) , I was unhappy, so I decided to leave my job and travel. I left italy for three months , I went in to London and I really loved that city. It was winter but the weather wasn't too cold. I was lucky , Then I finished money (Not sure what you want to say) and I came back to milan. It was a good experience. The only negative point is that I have had nobody no one to talk speak  English with.

Essay

Pros and cons of having mobile phone.

There are few people in 21th century who can live without mobile phones. I would say that they are almost like underwear! Thus, what's What are the pros and cons?

Firstly, we can be in touch with friends, even in the middle of night. We can send them _a_ text message or just give a call. However, mobile phines contain _a_ GPS system. In short, someone perhaps will could track us. Secondly,we are able to surf the web, listen to music or and read books; all of this in one site. Hence, if we have travel a long way to go,  (eg. by train) , we don't have to carry a heavy bag, full of books and CD's. Nonetheless, our calmness could be disrupted. When someone is in charge of _a_ big company team, cell phone do not stop ring. (You should explain this more point more). That is to say, we have to cope with "persecutors" (Word check, I think you want to say something else). Moreover, mobile phones are life-threatening. They could be carcinogen, because of the radioactive waves. Anyway, people with serious problems with getting up aor remembering can find _a_ cell phone useful for example to taking notes or setting the alarm clock.
To recap, owning phones have their its advantages and disadvantages. The point is- But can we live without them?Are we able to risk our life lives? Lastly- what _do_ I  think about it? (If you ask a rhetorical question in your writing, you should answer it).
I hope that you found my article interesting and useful.

Sorry I made mistakes in the first correction 

REVISION:

Yesterday was a beautiful day. Sometimes I work on Sundays, but yesterday I did not. I got up at seven o'clock and put on my running shoes to go running with my friends for an hour. Afterwards, me and my wife drank cocktails. In the afteroon, I smoked a cigar in the garden with my two cats. Later on, I ate with my whole family. My wife had cooked a typical pizza from our city for dinner. After dinner, I helped my daughter, Gaia, study mathematics.

SUNDAY

Yestarday was a beatifull day.
On Sunday sometimes i works, yestarday no. I got up (get up) at seven o'clock a.m.__i wore my running shoes, and with my friends we went to a 1 hour of running.
After with my wife we have take (toke) a cocktail (in italian "aperitivo")
I ate with all my family, and after__ helped my daugther Gaia to studed mathematic_..
In the afternoon i smoked my cigar in the garder, with two __ my cats, and for dinner my wife have cooked (cucinare) a typical pizza ofour city.

REVISION: 

<em>Yesterday was a beautiful day. Sometimes I work on Sundays, but yesterday I did not. I got up at seven o'clock and I put my running shows to go running with my friends for an hour. Afterwards, me and my wife drank cocktails. In the afteroon, I smoked my cigar in the garden with my two cats. I ate with my whole family. My had wife cooked a typical pizza from out city for dinner. After dinner, I helped my daughter, Gaia, study mathematics. </em>

Free Admission on Museum

Nowadays,people can visit museum for free and the number of free admissions are on museum is gorwing.Its becoming a special place to poen one's mind.Why the more and more museum for free? Why are more museums becoming free? 
Culture is a symboy of the city or country.Free admission ointo museums is a step to show the culture.This can make more and more people accept the knowledge.However,sometimes it can make some problems.For example we must protect something well in the museum.Otherwise it will hure something.It is bad for the ctiy of country.
In one word,free admission to museum is a good way to thing for us.We will get lots of benefits from this if we can protect something well.

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Orange = awkward phrasing

Red = spelling mistakes 

Green = what should be taken out 

marathon of Berlin

Two weeks ago I run marathon of Berlin. It was my 3º marathon and it was a incredible experience.
There were a lot of people running and even more supporting. The atmosphere was absom and the weather was great.
In this race the Word record was broken by Kimetto. An ethiopan athletic and a long, long time after I arrived to the finish line. But I broken my personal record too.
There were plenty of music band and I enjoyed too much.
I went to Berlin with my wife an a couple of friends of us. We did tourist for this amazing city.
We have been before, so, this time, __ saw some attraction_ that we couldn't see in the first visit.

REVISIONS:

<em>Two weeks ago I ran a marathon in Berlin. It was my 3rd marathon and it was an incredible experience. There were a lot of people running and even more supporting. The atmosphere was awesome and the weather was great. In this race, Kimetto broke the World Record, who is an ethiopian athlete. He had already finished the race before I got to the finishline. But I broke my personal too. There were plenty of music bands and I enjoyed them all too much. I went to Berlin with my wife and a couple of our friends. We were tourist in this amazing city before. This time howver, we saw some attractions that we couldn't see in the first visit. </em>