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Pros and cons of having mobile phone.
There are few people in 21th century who can live without mobile phones. I would say that they are almost like underwear! Thus, what's What are the pros and cons?
Firstly, we can be in touch with friends, even in the middle of night. We can send them _a_ text message or just give a call. However, mobile phines contain _a_ GPS system. In short, someone perhaps will could track us. Secondly,we are able to surf the web, listen to music or and read books; all of this in one site. Hence, if we have travel a long way to go, (eg. by train) , we don't have to carry a heavy bag, full of books and CD's. Nonetheless, our calmness could be disrupted. When someone is in charge of _a_ big company team, cell phone do not stop ring. (You should explain this more point more). That is to say, we have to cope with "persecutors" (Word check, I think you want to say something else). Moreover, mobile phones are life-threatening. They could be carcinogen, because of the radioactive waves. Anyway, people with serious problems with getting up aor remembering can find _a_ cell phone useful for example to taking notes or setting the alarm clock.
To recap, owning phones have their its advantages and disadvantages. The point is- But can we live without them?Are we able to risk our life lives? Lastly- what _do_ I think about it? (If you ask a rhetorical question in your writing, you should answer it).
I hope that you found my article interesting and useful.
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