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for a long time , 13 years I worked (This is written awkwardly) I've worked 13 long years.  finally last year when I was working at In Apple (the biggest company in the world) I got I really don't like my job (I'm not sure what you're trying to say?) , I was unhappy, so I decided to leave my job and travel. I left italy for three months , I went in to London and I really loved that city. It was winter but the weather wasn't too cold. I was lucky , Then I finished money (Not sure what you want to say) and I came back to milan. It was a good experience. The only negative point is that I have had nobody no one to talk speak  English with.

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I worked for a long time, for 13 years I worked. Finally, last year when I was working In at Apple (the biggest company in the world) I got that I really don't didn't(passato) like my job. I was unhappy so I decided to leave quit my job and travel. I left italy for three months, I went in London and I really loved that city. It was winter there but the weather wasn't too cold so I was lucky. Then I finished ran out of(espressione) money and I came back to milan... it was a good experience... the only negative point is : I have nobody to talk speak English with.

A very good post, some advanced uses of English and very natural also.