Could you correct my writing, please? Thanks a lot in advance.

Hello,
How are you and your family doing? I hope you are doing great, and this letter finds you happy and in good health.
Sorry for not writing for so long, but I have a good excuse. I have been at away from home for more than a month.
My daughter and I went to Sochi, to on the Black sea.
The holiday was fabulous, but ,unfortunately, so very costly expensive. I took out a loan from the bank to pay for our resort house, and for the train and the plane tickets. By installments, I am going to repay my debt to the bank.
We went there by train. The train in which we travelled was new and was constructed specially to for the Olympic games. It was brand new and very clean. We returned by plane.
Today I went to work. It was my first working day after my holiday.  I cleaned bubble gum off of two windows and the floorfrom bubble chews.
That's all for now.
Please take good care.
Lots of love,
Your Friend Ada

Medecine for insomnia

I had tried to sleep for about an hour, then I decide to write a note on italki rather than waste my hallucination.  Not sure what you meant here.  Maybe you mean "waste your time."


I have been studying English for about 20 years. It's quiet interesting for me because I have never done any one thing for that a long of a time before.
Of course, I can blame that on Korea's poor educational system, but I have to say I didn't get in any troubles before I realized that I needed to get out of tiny well. Is this a place?  Or an insult?
Sometimes, I was wondering that. What if I didn't had not wanted to change my circumstances? How would I be do i doing this minute right now.

Alright, time to get back to bed.
If anyone wants to learn Korean, let me know.
and Thank you for correcting my note!

I have a big problem with the theme Family Tree

¿What is the best form for way to learn this theme?

I would suggest learning the words for family members.  Like these:

mother, father, sister, brother, cousin, aunt, uncle, grandfather, grandmother

If you already know the words, then start writing about your family. Like:

"I have two sisters and one brother."  "My grandfather was a pianist."  Ect. 

IELTS Writing Task 1, Practice Task 5, 2nd Attempt, Correct it Please

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there.
• Ask them for help finding accommodations
• Tell them where you would like to live
• Tell them the type of place you are looking for
You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Friend,
I am planning to move to Rawalpindi to find some handsome a good job. due to which I need your support to help finding or look an economical apartment. for me. because I am asking you because you are live there or have been living there since 2000, and therefore, you are quite familiar with the city.
Firstly, I would prefer those accommodations which are near to the main road, from where I can access the transportation easily.   Secondly, it should be near to the main markets from where I can buy groceries conveniently. and Finally, the most important thing is that the apartment should be located in safe place or area.
The apartment should be have a minimum of two rooms with attach bath rooms, a kitchen, a lounge, and it would be excellent if it is with has a terrace. Apart from this, the rent of apartment should not be exceeds from twenty five thousand (dollars per year? Insert your "currency per time" filling in the bold words with your currency and length of time), because I have to pay the rent from my own out of pocket. money
I hope you will help me in looking for an apartment. or in this matter.
Looking forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely yours,
Awais

Fruits and Vegetables

The last few months, I have been reading about the food and health. I have found books, friends, websites, and videos on youtube about the importance of eating the fruits and vegetables for a good life. I met with a friend, who's father says that drinking only juice the vegetables juice for a month could improve his health. I also have been trying improve my feed to eat better.   Now I try to eat more fruits and vegetables all every days, and I see how it is good.

fruit is plural and singular, fruits is rarely used