IELTS Writing Task 1 Practice Task 5 2nd Attempt. Correct it Pplease

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there.
• Ask them for help finding accommodation
• Tell them where you would like to live
• Tell them the type of place you are looking for
You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Friend,
I am planning to move to Rawalpindi to find a new some handsome job due to which and I need your support help so that I can to find or look an economical apartment. for me because I think that you would be a lot of help becuase you have lived you are live there or living there since 2000, therefore, you are quite familiar with the city.
I will would prefer those accommodations which are that is near to the main road from where I can access the transport links easily. sSecondly, it should I would like it to be near to the main markets from where I can buy groceries conveniently and, most importantly, thing is that I would like the apartment should to be in safe place or area.
The apartment should be have a minimum of two rooms with attach that make up bathrooms, kitchen and lounge facilities and it would be excellent if it is has with terrace. Apart from this, the rent of apartment should not be exceeds from twenty five thousand dollars per year because I have to pay the rent from my own income pocket money
I hope you will help me in looking for apartment or in this matter.
I am Llooking forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely yours Yours sincerely,
Awais

If I'm being perfectly honest, I think that this task is slightly too complicated for yourself as I have had to carry out quite a lot of restructuring. I can see the content that you wish to communicate - and it's good, but I would recommend that you work on expressing yourself far more accurately on simpler tasks before attempting more complex ones such as IELTS essays. I hope that my corrections are of some use.

IELTS Writing Task 1, Practice Task 5, 2nd Attempt, Correct it Please

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there.
• Ask them for help finding accommodations
• Tell them where you would like to live
• Tell them the type of place you are looking for
You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Friend,
I am planning to move to Rawalpindi to find some handsome a good job. due to which I need your support to help finding or look an economical apartment. for me. because I am asking you because you are live there or have been living there since 2000, and therefore, you are quite familiar with the city.
Firstly, I would prefer those accommodations which are near to the main road, from where I can access the transportation easily.   Secondly, it should be near to the main markets from where I can buy groceries conveniently. and Finally, the most important thing is that the apartment should be located in safe place or area.
The apartment should be have a minimum of two rooms with attach bath rooms, a kitchen, a lounge, and it would be excellent if it is with has a terrace. Apart from this, the rent of apartment should not be exceeds from twenty five thousand (dollars per year? Insert your "currency per time" filling in the bold words with your currency and length of time), because I have to pay the rent from my own out of pocket. money
I hope you will help me in looking for an apartment. or in this matter.
Looking forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely yours,
Awais