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Hello, I'm Miwa from Japan (: I'm interested in foreign cultures and I like talking to people in other countries. I'm looking for friends especially who could point out my mistakes and help each other out with (:
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    Could someone check this email? Dear 〇〇, I hope you do not mind my contacting you out of blue. My name is Miwa 〇〇, and I live in Japan. I was referred to you by a colleague of my friend, ○○, who thought that you might be willing to help me with my job search when I told him that I am thinking about changing my job. I’d very much appreciate your help and advice. To introduce myself briefly, I am currently working in Logistics Department of figurines. Before I was transferred to the position, I bought previously owned goods such as branded items and precious metals. The reason I chose the company is because it developed BOP business which improves the living standard of the people in developing countries by business. I really feel like being involved in the business when I learned it at university, which led me to interning in South Africa. Recently, I took a look at myself and realized that I was categorizing what I’m interested in into job framework. Looking back the experiences I felt worthwhile in the past, it feels like what I actually like is to support people by their side. On that point, □□(company name) supports athletes and seems exciting and matching to my interest areas and career goals. It’s been also on my mind for a while since my company is one of the sponsors of □□ in Japan. I know you are busy and it's not your job to answer requests for advice, however, I would appreciate any pointers you might have about my job search. Thank you for your valuable time. Kind regards, Miwa 〇〇 TEL Email  ※It's an email to ask for advice and I haven't seen the job scription yet I know it's very long, but it'd be great if you could correct my mistakes or tell me any other ways to wrote it 🙏
    November 23, 2019
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    皆、お休みなさい。宜しくお願いします。

    僕は、ここに初めて書いた時です。夜に成って眠いから今は、寝出した方が良い。ここからは、よく書いて欲しいです。

    →僕はここに初めて<font style="background-color: yellow;">書きます</font>。夜に<font style="background-color: yellow;">な</font>って眠いから<font style="background-color: yellow;">もう</font><font style="background-color: yellow;">寝た</font>方がいいかな。<font style="background-color: yellow;">これから</font>は<font style="background-color: yellow;">きちん</font><font style="background-color: yellow;">と書</font><font style="background-color: yellow;">きたい</font>です。
    だから、また書きましょう。宜しくお願いします。

     

     色んな漢字をご存知ですね。またお時間があるときにぜひ投稿してください  (:

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    June 21, 2017
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  • Corrected

    昨日の夜について

    午前3時まで寝なかった。なぜ?


    夏の観光する予定を作るのためだから!

    →夏の(観光の)<font style="background-color: yellow;">計画を立てていた<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">から</font></font>!


    予定を考えるのが<font style="background-color: rgb(181, 165, 214);">好きよ</font>。始めなら長い時間で考える中になる。

     →<font style="background-color: yellow;">計画を立</font><font style="background-color: yellow;">てる</font>のは好き<font style="background-color: yellow;">だ</font>よ。<font style="background-color: yellow;">いったん始めると夢中</font>になる。

    *「好きよ 」は間違いではないですが、ほとんど使われることが無い上、女性っぽく聞こえてしまいます。


    飛行機のチケット、ホテルの予約、レビュー、色んな事を調べなければならない。


    長い時間いるので、寝る時間が減ってしまった。

     *「時間がかかって、寝る時間が減ってしまった」の方が自然だと思います

     
    ありがたい事に今日はそんなに疲れてない。


    でも、今夜絶対は早く寝なければならない。

     

     

    自然に聞こえるように少し書き換えてみました。

    今日はゆっくり休んでくださいね! 

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    June 21, 2017
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    June 19, 2017
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    Dying languages Iramkarapte, e= iwanke ya? That means “Hi, how are you?” in Ainu. But you’ve probably never heard that, or any Ainu. Fortunately, Japan is economically a big country and Japanese is still spoken by 125 million speakers, however, roughly half of the world’s 6,000 or 7,000 languages have been in danger of going extinct including Ainu at the same time. Ainu is a part of Japan, which means we are losing a tiny bit of us. What happens when a language die? Why we must save endangered languages? One of the reasons is to save ways of interpreting the world. We divide the world by languages and form our own recognition. Imagine a new born baby, he can see things around him, however, he doesn’t know what it is even if it’s his dad’s face or himself in the mirror. It is not that you put a label of language on objects, once there is a language (word), then you can recognize them, which means you’d lose your own world if the language dies. The second reason is to save the culture and history. We experience plenty of things ever since we were born, at the same time, we hear the words to describe them, understand the world and form ourselves. Also, we develop words and expressions which are not in other languages while living in the same place for a long time. For instance, we cannot talk about four seasons if we adopt the language of the people living in the desert. That can’t be worldwide since the culture, the climate and the social structure are all different. Language itself is a culture and history, that is, they die with its language. Language is the bellwether. It shapes our understanding of how world works, and it’s hard to maintain the full richness, depth and complexity of a culture without its languages. That’s why we have to save languages. The loss of language diversity leads the loss of biological diversity, and endangerment happens when people are no longer learning the language. So let’s learn languages. Different languages provide distinct pathways of thought and frameworks for thinking and solving problems. Hopefully Japanese exists forever.
    June 19, 2017
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    ここでの意味は「つまり/すなわち」という意味です。「通称(ニックネーム等) +こと+本名」の形で使うと、同一人物であると結びつけることができます。なので、「神谷聖良、すなわち毛羽毛現は... 」と書き換えられます (:
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    June 7, 2017
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    June 6, 2017
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    Indiscriminate Terrorisms The other day I was scrolling through news when I came across an article concerning terrorisms. Recently there have been many indiscriminate terrorisms around the world. Fortunately, we haven’t got big attacks yet in Japan, however, it feels like we sometimes get involved in one while on the train. One type of terrorists is perfume women. Just imagine you are squeezing into a jammed train during rush hour, and then a woman steps in the door and stuck in just next to you. And she put way too much perfume on. You might choke and cough, and everyone on train would also be about die momentarily. What’s worse, you smell like it too. You have steeped in it, and it has become you. I consider it as an indiscriminate terrorism. Next one is leaky headphones. I guess many people have experienced this. Suddenly, loudly, from the leaky headphones of the cute girl behind me on train heavy metal. Me no happy, it ruined my fresh morning mood. Another day a guy on train was listening to an anime song 4 times in a row. He took us all into his anime world that none of us wanted, and I went to the venue of my job interview having the song stuck in my head. The third one is McDonald’s take away. There are at least three people who fill the carriage with the smell of McDonald per a year. Its french fries smell is especially very strong. Looking to my left, nothing, looking to my right, also nothing… Where on earth that McDonald smell coming from? It’s like a torture for someone who is feeling very hungry. You might have a negative image to these indiscriminate terrorisms on the train. Yes, it can be uncomfortable to encounter that kind of situations, sometimes even painful if your eyes and throat are burning due to a strong perfume. However, I guess it’s not always bad. Even if you felt tough while it’s happening, you can have a good laugh about it later. It could spice up your daily commute a little bit. If I have to commute somewhere, I’d rather it be a hilarious ride.
    June 6, 2017
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  • Corrected

    言えない気持ち

     

    最近、親友は問題合った<font style="background-color: rgb(247, 198, 206);">けど</font>、彼女に優しい言葉は言えない。

    → 最近、親友は問題<font style="background-color: yellow;">が</font>合ったけど、彼女に優しい言葉<font style="background-color: yellow;">をかけられない</font>。

    *"問題があったけど” は 「大変なことが/いろいろあったけど」にすると自然かなと思います。

     

    このトラブルがただ助言で消えないが、優しい言葉に言うは自己満足のことです。

    → このトラブル<font style="background-color: yellow;">は</font>ただ助言で<font style="background-color: yellow;">は</font>消えない<font style="background-color: yellow;">けど</font>、優しい言葉<font style="background-color: yellow;">をかける</font><font style="background-color: yellow;">こと</font>は<font style="background-color: yellow;">自己満足</font>です。

    *上の文が "<font style="background-color: rgb(247, 198, 206);">けど</font>"  だったので、"けど"に統一しました。

     

    今、私は彼女のトラブルにだんだん消してと祈ります。

    →今、私は彼女のトラブル<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">が</font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">徐々に収まることを</font>祈っ<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">ています</font>。 

     

     

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    May 23, 2017
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    Could someone check my writing? With stunning beaches, emerald water, and exotic trees, the Philippines is true tropical paradise. I was so excited to visit the country, but I was worried that I can't understand their language and encounter a language barrier. However, my concern was erased since everyone I met talked to me in English and which was much more fluent than I’d expected. I met plenty of people when I took a taxi, went to malls, supermarkets and wandering off to a cafe. I found everyone is fluent in English from young shop staff to taxi drivers who looked like around sixties. They usually spoke a local language, but they quickly changed the language and talked to me in English once they glanced at me. I was amazed how good they are at English and how developed the English prevalence is in the Philippines. When I went to a theater to watch Inside Out from Disney, there were many kids. Although it was English without subtitles, they seemed to understand perfectly what the characters were saying and they were laughing a lot, which amazed me. There was a slight disappointment in my heart when I was only being quiet while everyone was laughing though. ....→②
    May 22, 2017
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