Hey, please check it. Nowadays, it is normal to see students leaving the high schools before getting a diploma. Obviously, because of this they will have many obstacles in the future but the question is why are they leaving high schools and not finishing them? The poverty and the broing courses of schools are the principal reasons. The poverty is a problem that all governmets try to fight with but it’s always there. Students don’t have enough money top ay for high schools so they have to dropout of them. Als it’s possible that in students’ houses there is poverty so they have to quit studying in order to start working. Another reason about why students dropout of high school is that they all have the same courses. These courses make students feel bored, they are necessary but high schools to motivate students should teach specific courses that can attract them. Because students are interested and can do something else not the same courses because they bore them. In conclusion, students droping out of high schools is a very serious prolem because it’s a result of serious problems too, so this should be faced as son as posible for students’ benefit.

Hi, can somebody correct this? Dear National Park Service: I’m writing to give you some suggestions about what you should do to reduce the negative effect of tourism in the National Park. As a current visitor of this park, I think you may have in the park persons dedicated only to give advice to tourists and also you may prohibit vehicles in the park for the following reasons. The tourists mostly don’t know about what can they do and what they can’t, so that’s why giving some persons in the National Park’s staff the responsibility of telling tourists tips for not damaging the park is a good solution. These persons should give tips without being rude with tourists because being kind with them has better results. Prohibiting vehicles in the park is also a good way to less the damage for the National Park, because cars not only damage the scenery and the environment, but also it they are damaging the vegetation and wildlife so if you want the park to be well you should prohibit vehicles. To conclude, the National Park is a very important place for our country so I hope you take in consideration my suggestions and do something to less damage on this beautiful natural place.

Please, can someone correct this? In a week I'm going to have a writing exam for ECCE certification, so I'm practising here on italki. Hope you help me correcting this! THIS IS THE WRITING: Dear Superintendent of Schools: I’ve recently read an article in The City Times about after-school music and art programs have been canceled, so I’m writing to give you my opinion about this. As many parents, teachers and students, I criticize this because some reasons I’m going to write below. The art for students and also for every people is necessary because it gives us the chance to tell the world we can do something incredible and also it’s important to develop the imagination. If Black Rock Board of Education is cancelling the music and art programs, how will it teach students to be creative or to do something that people would like? It should really think on that. Something more that I can say is that why if teachers are going to receive a pay raise next year, they cancel the programs? They say they are cancelling the programs to reduce spending but ironically they are going to be better paid next year. I think they just want good vacations and be relaxed but they are not thinking on kids and what they want to learn after school. To conclude, what Black Rock Board of Education is doing is terrible for kids so it may think better on its decision. Sincerely, Carlos Córdova

Hello, please can someone correct this? Please, first read the text in the picture and then check my writing. HERE IS THE WRITING: Dear Travel Editor: I’ve recently read in the the City Times an article about Family vacation. So, I’m writing this to tell you how me and my family are going to enjoy this summer vacation. One thing that we will do is to go to the park with the whole family, so there we can picnic and also, me, my brother and my father can play soccer together and have fun. Also, the park is a place where everything is free so my family will not spend money in nothing, just in the food for the picnic. Another place that we are planning to go during vacations is beach. It will not be very expensive for us because my home is near the beach so the gas price will not affect us too much. Beach is a good place to go with family because there is the sea, the wáter, it’s very difficult for people to feel bored there. Most of the members of my family know how to swim so going to beach is very nice to us because we can compete there. To conclude, during vacation most of the things are expensive but it depends on each family to make it cheaper. And about haveing fun… you’re with family, who can not have fun with family? Sincerely, Carlos.

Can someone correct it? Dear Ms. Apleber: Hello, my name is Carlos and I’m writing this letter in order to give you some suggestions about the Job and Career center that will be opened next year should offer. I, as a high school student, think that the new center should have a program of vocational guidance and also it should offer lessons about basic courses of college for the reasons I’m going to explain below. First, the new center should offer vocational guidance in order to help students feel less scary about making career plans, so there students can know more about their future career and also make his or her election early. Then, the new Job and Career center might offer lesson about basic courses of college because that is very useful for students to be prepared for new knowledge in college. To conclude, I’m veruy excited about knowig that this center will be opened next year and I hope you take in consideration my suggestions.

Please check it Dear Ms. Apleber: Hello, my name is Carlos and I’m writing this letter in order to give you some suggestions about the Job and Career center that will be opened next year should offer. I, as a high school student, think that the new center should have a program of vocational guidance and also it should offer lessons about basic courses of college for the reasons I’m going to explain below. First, the new center should offer vocational guidance in order to help students feel less scary about making career plans, so there students can know more about their future career and also make his or her election early. Then, the new Job and Career center might offer lesson about basic courses of college because that is very useful for students to be prepared for new knowledge in college. To conclude, I’m veruy excited about knowig that this center will be opened next year and I hope you take in consideration my suggestions.

Hey, can someone correct this? Hello, i'm practicing for my next month's ECCE exam so now i'm doing writing, please check it and give me some advices. Dear Editor: Hello, Im writing this letter in order to give you my opinion about the new menu that Camps Bay High School has introduced . As a student, I’m disagree with this decision the school has taken so I’m gonna give you below some advices I think you may take on consideration. First, I think healthy food in school’s cafeteria is not a bad idea but only healthy food in the menu really is, because most of students and people don’t like healthy food and prefer fast food so replacing it, obviously, will drop the number of students eating at the cafeteria because they will go to another place to eat fast food. Something more that the school may do is try to make fast food healthier, I think that’s the best way to have a big number of students eating at the cafeteria and also eating healthier. There are a lot of ways for making fast food healthier, just search on internet for recipes. For concluding, what school is looking for is not bad, what is bad is the way it does so, I hope you give importance to my advices and take them in consideration. Sincerely, Carlos.