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Why did i studied english? This is my first writing on italki, i would like you to correct it! Why did i studied english? Well, nowadays here not only in Peru (yeah, Peru is the country where i live) but also worldwide is necessary to study many languages to have a good future, but i decided English as my second language because of many reasons. First, because English is the most common language in the world so studying it will have been a better way to find a job or to have an occupation everywhere. I am only an student but i think in the future of course i will have to work in some place so that's why i chose english. Second, i love music in English, especially rap so i learned English in order to can sing it easily and to understand what rappers sing. Finally, i read, don't remember where but i read that learning another language is like opening a whole new life so why not opening a life with english? is the world's most common language so with it i can meet a lot of people. That are the principal reasons i studied English and now i know it more i like it so much! i hope you correct my writing!

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Why i've chosen to study english?

 

This is my first time writing on italki, Could someone please correct this.

Why i've chosen to study english?

Well, nowadays, not only in Peru (yeah, Peru is the country in which i live) but also worldwide it is necessary to study multiple languages to give ourselfs the best chance in the future. I've decided to learn English as my second language for many reasons.

First. English is the most common language in the world so by studying it, i will have a better chance

of finding a job somewhere. I'm only a student at the moment, but by speaking english i'llbe better prepared when i have to work later in life.


Secondly, i love music, especially rap and by learning English i'll be able to sing along easily and  understand what the rappers are saying.


Finally, i read somewhere that learning another language is like opening a whole new life, so why not start with english? Being the world's most common language, i'll have the best oprtunity to meet lots of people.


Those are the main reasons i'm studying English. Now, the more i know, the more i like it!
i hope you will correct my writing!

 

 

A pleasure to correct you writing!

i love my music too!

 

Hasta Luego

Aloz :)

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