Hi, can somebody correct this please?

This is an essay, I'm practicing for my ECCE exam tomorrow, please help me correcting this.

Nowadays, it is normal to see students leaving the high schools before getting a diploma. Obviously, because of this they will have many obstacles in the future, but the question is why are they leaving high schools and not finishing them? The poverty and the broing boring courses of schools are the principal reasons.
The Poverty is a problem that all governmets governments try to fight with but it’s always there. Students don’t have enough money top ay to pay for high schools so they have to drop out of them. Also it’s possible that in students’ houses there is poverty, so they have to quit studying in order to start working.
Another reason about why students dropout of high school is that they all have the same courses. These courses make students feel bored, they are necessary but high schools to motivate students should teach specific courses that can attract them. Because students are interested and can do something else, not the same courses because they bore them.
In conclusion, students dropping out of high schools is a very serious problem because it’s a result of serious problems too, so this should be faced as son as posible for students’ benefit.

I agree with your ideas!  Very nice job on your entry.  Good luck on your exam :)