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Dear Travel Editor:
I’ve recently read an article  in the the City Times an article about a Family vacation. So, I’m writing this to tell you how me and my family  and I are going to enjoy this summer vacation.
One thing that we will do is to go to the park with the whole family, so there we can and have a picnic and also, me, my brother, and my father and  I can play soccer together and have fun. Also, The park is a place where everything is free so my family will not only spend money in nothing, just in the food for the picnic.
Another place that we are planning to go during our  vacations is the  beach. It will not be very expensive for us because my home is near the beach so the gas price will not affect us too much. The beach is a good place to go with family because there is the sea, the wáter, and it’s very difficult for people to feel bored there. Most of the members of my family know how to swim so going to the  beach is very nice to us enjoyable because we can compete there.
To conclude, during a vacation most of the many things are expensive but it depends on each family to make it cheaper. And About haveing fun… you’re with family, who can not have fun with family?
Sincerely, Carlos.