This makes sense, but it could be better.

 

For example, you can say: "对我来说，学习中文很重要" or “对我来说，学习中文是很重要的”。

This will sound more smoothly.

 

Maybe in the textbook, we are told that "important" is an adjective, but not all adjectives are translated into Chinese with "的". 

北京的莲花开得晚

湖镜上的一朵莲花
犹如不小心地跳进水里的温柔女子
其粉红色的裙子在波浪上微微摇动
绿（色的）袖子随风飘扬 （在微风中缓缓飘舞）
她紧闭着花苞，微微（地）张开笑脸
朝着阳光的方向送出带着香味的飞吻

 

您的中文真好！

对这首小诗，我做了一点修改。主要是出于上下句的对称和诵读起来上口的考虑，请参考。

Generally speaking, you have done a great job! Congratulations!

 

But I have a question, what do you mean by “交通生意”? The term is weird! Since I used to work in the "logistics department", I guess you mean "logistics", am I right?

If so, you should say “物流生意”. 

 

使用问题

你更喜欢用 认识你很高兴 还是 很高兴认识你吗？

 

Both of them. They are all right!

According to some theory, Chinese people tend to say cause first and then result. So "认识你很高兴" should be the standard way of expression. But, take it easy, that's only a theory, and in our daily life, we use ”很高兴认识你" very often. 

Both of them can mean "odd" or "peculiar", but 古怪 is kind of a derogatory word. The different is subtle, not very strictly.

No one will be arrested for being drunk in China. Maybe only when you are too drunk to find your home or to sleep in the street, police may come. Even when the police comes, he/she does not come to arrest you, but to check your address or identity. Sometimes drunken people may be taken to the police only for temporary stay, not arrest. When you become conscious again, you can leave. But most of the time, no one cares about that.

试着写一手微诗

桃花色自清晨的天空来，
曙光的使者用凄凉的花瓣哭泣
被暴雨洗得一干二净的京城就像刚从战场回家的人
不敢相信脆弱的幸福，沉醉在黎明的柔光里

 

In fact, there's a typo in the title!

It should be 一首微诗, not 一手微诗.

 

不过，你的中文很棒！佩服