| Last month | Last 3 months | All time | |
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| Completed lessons | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Attendance rate | 100% | 100% | 100% |
- Would you mind helping me to modify writing The bar chart gives the data of men and women research students studying six science-related subjects, physics,astronomy,geology,biology,medicine and veterinary medicine,at a UK university in 2009. According to the chart,the numbers of male research students learning physics,astronomy,andgeology are greatly more than the numbers of female. More precisely, there areapproximate 220 men studying physics,while only about 45 women.And the number of male studying astronomy is 150, the same as the numbers of studying geology, but just about 60 and 75 females learning astronomy and geology,respectively. Compared to above three subjects, the data of male studying biology and medicine is just a bit over the data of female. More exactly, the number of men is 230 ,210, and the numbers of women is 200 ,190, in biology and medicine,respectively. By contrast, the people of women studying veterinary medicine out-number men. There are 140 women,while only100 men. In conclusion,execpt veterinary medicine, in other five subjects, the numbers of research students are male-dominated .
August 30, 201200 住在中国(现在有点累 haha)
最近我觉得了左右(决定)住在中国。 下个春天的时侯(There is no grammar error here,but it can be simplified, such as '来年春季')我会去南京,除了此时(现在 ps.'此时' is usually used for a moment,while '现在' represents a period of time),我(除了)学汉语以外,可能(还要)寻找(一份)工作了, 见面(见见)老朋友了。 可是我的家(家人)担心我(,)我去的时候(时间)太多(久)了。我的妹妹的女儿(It can be said '外甥女')很年轻(年纪还很小 '年轻' is used for describing the young, but not children)。她长大的何时我回来(她长大了,我可能才回来)。我的家很小(I can not catch your point in this sentence, if you want to express that there are only several people in your family,you can say '我家是个小家庭')所以我们(他们)很担心。一边喜欢看世界一边学了(我喜欢一边游览世界一边学习),我到去和享受旅游(享受到处去旅行的经历)。
Welcome come to China! I think it will be a wonderful experience in your life. I enjoy traveling , but I have never been to other countries. Now, I am preparing further study abroad.
一起加油!哈哈……
0 votedAugust 24, 20120仰彼西风 用怀中国 · · ·
仰彼西风 用(以)怀中国
愿骋代马 倏忽西徂
多信永至 思彼朋友
久疏问候 深感抱歉
上方的诗歌的「原本」是我最喜欢读的。
我到十七岁才按自己的意志(意愿)开始学习。这以前,我一点儿都不(想)学习,最讨厌外语(英语)。考分惨极了。(,)我的平均分数是百分之十分左右。那时候在高中的图书馆里(,)我(光)选择(学习)「论语」「孙子」了。 下课后我常常去图书馆。在那个图书馆里几乎没有人。我(靠)读书来度过(一段)很充实(的)时间(时光)。每天晚上在家里用毛笔抄写「三国演义的诗词」好几遍(后),终于(能)背得上来了。正在(正是)那个时候,看到这首诗「朔风」了····。这是已经(已经是)二十以上(多)年前的事。
(下方) 这本线装书是我十七岁时抄写的「孙子兵法」。うまい,您好厉害啊!老实说,《论语》和《孙子》我至今还不会背,深感惭愧!
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