我的新邻居

上个星期两个中国人迁入我的土木。 在这里没有多人能说汉语的人不多。所以， 土木的雇员都要帮助新来的邻居。但是他们说得的话相互没都不懂。 

有一个雇员认识我的妈妈，这样他说了这种情况他把这个情况和我的妈妈说了。 他说了以后， 我的妈妈告诉他我在学习汉语。而然后他要请求我帮我们的邻居。 

他们看了我的信言以后就能懂雇员说的话了。(My understanding here is that: So that they can understand what those employee say with the help of message for translation. Right?)

Tomorrow I will go see the doctor. I am six months pregnant. My doctor will check my overall health and listen to my baby's heartbeat. I hope to receive only good news from the doctor.

明天看医生

明天我会去看医生。我有了六个月的身孕。我的医生将会给我做一个全面的身体检查，而且他也会听一下（我的）宝宝的心跳。我希望从医生那里只听到好消息。

Everyday Life 每日生活

I live in Brighton. My house is great! Not far from the shops and post office. In addition, it's not far from the fire station. I can see the fire engines. But I haven't seen the firemen. I think that firemen are handsome. ;)

old:我住在布莱顿。 我放假很好! 不远处的商店和邮局。 此外，消防局不远。 我可以看到消防车。 但是，我没有看到消防队员。 我认为消防队员是帅！;) 

new:我住在布莱顿。 我的房子很好（很大）! 它离商店和邮局不远。 此外，它离消防局（也）不远。我可以看到消防车。 但是，我没有看到过消防队员。 我认为消防队员很帅！;) 

I drink lots of beverages every day. Hot drinks and water. Lots of different kinds of hot drinks.

old:我每天喝很多的饮料。 热饮和水。 很多不同的热饮。 

new:我每天喝很多（/大量）的饮料。 热饮和水。 很多不同（款）的热饮。

Forgive me! My Chinese is so bad! I can't remember a lot of words.

old:原谅我！ 我写的中文不好！ 我不记得很多话。 

new:原谅我！ 我写的中文太差了！很多词我都不记得了。

My boyfriend lives in Belgium. In the future, I will go and see him. Many people often travel from London to Brussels. Many people live in London and work in Brussels, or live in Brussels and work in London. They often take the Channel Tunnel train.

old:我的男朋友在比利时工作。 在未来，我想看到他。 许多人通常旅行伦敦到布鲁塞尔。 许多人住在伦敦，在布鲁塞尔工作，或住在布鲁塞尔，在伦敦工作。 他们通常做隧道隧道火车。 

new:我的男朋友住在比利时。 未来，我想去看他。 许多伦敦人经常到布鲁塞尔旅行。 （而且，）许多人住在伦敦，工作在布鲁塞尔，或住在布鲁塞尔，工作在伦敦。 他们经常乘坐（英伦海峡）海底隧道火车（来往于两个城市）。

I'm online now, so I can use italki. 

old:现在我在线。 所以我可以用italki。（I think this sentence is just right!） 

Today I went to the shop to buy food. I bought some fish. I don't have a fishing net, so I must buy fish!

old:今天我去商店买食物。我买了鱼。我没有一个鱼网，所以，我需还要买鱼！ 

new:今天我去商店买了食物（or you can say 吃的东西）。我买了一些鱼。我没有鱼网，所以，我必须买鱼！

In our shed there are a lot of cobwebs. So I think there are a lot of spiders living there! My housemate really doesn't like spiders! He is scared of spiders.

old:在我们的棚有很多的蛛网。所以我认为很多的蜘蛛住在那！我的室友真不喜欢蜘蛛。他很怕蜘蛛！ 

new:在我们的小屋里有很多的蜘蛛网。所以我认为有很多的蜘蛛住在那里！我的室友真不喜欢蜘蛛。他很怕蜘蛛！

By the way your Chinese is not bad:)

4. 除了星期一以外，我还有在星期三和星期四上课。

以外 means apart from, except, so you should delete 以外. 还有 means also have, but it should be verb, right? But you want to use an adverb before “在星期三和星期四上课”, right? So you should delete 有. The whole sentence should be 除了星期一，我还在星期三和星期四上课。

5. 我的活儿提高了以后，就我的工资也增加了。

You want to mean that: The amount of my work increases, meanwhile my salary also increases. Right? If so, In Chinese we say 我的活儿多 not 我的活儿提高. So the whole sentence should be 我的活儿多了以后，我的工资也增加了。Or you can also say 我的活儿多了以后，我的工资也就增加了。In this case 就 help you to emphasize the verb 增加. If you want to use 提高, maybe it means the quality of your work is improved. So in this case you can say 我的工作质量提高了以后，我的工资也（就）增加了。

6. 对，外边是正下雪的，毋忘了手来你的伞。

In English you would say: It is snowing. Right you use be verb to express present progressive tense, but in Chinese we don’t use “是”. Also 是…的 means something has some character, e.g. 那个苹果是红色的. But your sentence doesn’t mean the place outside door has some character. It is just present progressive tense. So you may just say: 外边正在下雪。毋 in Chinese means not, but it is in written Chinese, maybe in very formal occasion. So in this sentence 别 is enough. And you want to express that don’t forget take your umbrella with you. You may say 别忘了带你的伞. Also maybe you want to say 带来, in 带来, 来 is a directional complement, but you did not emphasize the direction, right? So you need not use 来. So the whole sentence should be 对，外边正在下雪，别忘了带你的伞。