My homework, pls help me to revise it. >,。 Mcdonald, a prominent western food icon, sprung up in every corner of China since last century while Chinese restuarant still remains its dominating position in China. The reason why they didn't get involved in the battle over market is the utter differences in their ingredients, services and cultures. The simple ingredients of Mcdonald-fried chicken, fried potato and bread will never make it a hard time for you to make a choice while the Chinese restaurant take almost everything edible as the ingredients. They can cook whatever you dare to eat. In addition to the service. Mcdonald provides drive-in windows service and food delivering service. A Chinese restaurant, on the contary, will never so that. Customer has to walk there, make a order and pack it home if he likes. Mcdonald, with no doubt, represents a fast food culture with food cooked fast, delivered fast and eaten fast. It is for people needs to save time. The Chinese restaurant is utterly the opposit. It stands for a Chinese traditional culture which attatches great importance to the delicacy of food. It is a place to loos your pace and enjoy the food. If these two sales pattern could learn from each other and be more fitable to the current needs, a prosperous future won't be far away.

My homework, pls help me to correct it.^.^ Mcdonald, a prominent western food icon, sprung up in every corner of China since last century while Chinese restuarant still remains its dominating position in China. The reason why they didn't get involved in the battle over market is the utter differences in their ingredients, services and cultures. The simple ingredients of Mcdonald-fried chicken, fried potato and bread will never make it a hard time for you to make a choice while the Chinese restaurant take almost everything edible as the ingredients. They can cook whatever you dare to eat. In addition to the service. Mcdonald provides drive-in windows service and food delivering service. A Chinese restaurant, on the contary, will never so that. Customer has to walk there, make a order and pack it home if he likes. Mcdonald, with no doubt, represents a fast food culture with food cooked fast, delivered fast and eaten fast. It is for people needs to save time. The Chinese restaurant is utterly the opposit. It stands for a Chinese traditional culture which attatches great importance to the delicacy of food. It is a place to loos your pace and enjoy the food. If these two sales pattern could learn from each other and be more fitable to the current needs, a prosperous future won't be far away.

My homework, pls help me to correct it. it's only a homework:) It is common for teenagers longing for financial independence from their parents. So once they get into the college and live separately, this desire would be applied into a part-time job. To me, the disadvantages of a part-time job outweigh the advantages. Students, espaciallt thoes who are new in school are easily to be blinded by thoes deceptive advertisements and jump into the traps set by thoes profit-oriented companies. There never lacks examples that students being cheated by part-time agencies. Besides, some of the students give priority to part-time job, which finally lead to a catastrophic result in their study. The ignorance of budget time and the desire for more money will always distract the students from their study. What's more, a part-time job sometimes paves the way to decadence. Some of the students sho seldom have self-control and have no idea of how to utilize their money would easily go rotten. They would pursue things beyond their reach to compete with others in material. Considering all these nagtive effects of part-time jobs, students should do the right thing at the right time instead of chasing the unrealistic financial independence.

Best Way To Stay Healthy(homework. pls help me check it.):) Here is a question: If you are only permitted to own one of them, fame, wealth and health,which one would you choose? This is a no hard question for health lies the fundamental for everything. That's the reason why people, no matter in ancient times or in modern societ, are all looking for the best way to stay healthy. What's the best way? Keeping a good mood. To keep a good mood requires one to be generous. Don't fuss about the haves and havenots.Don't envy what others have but cherish what we have. To be happy to share happiness with others. The most important, to help people with all you have. To keep a good mood requires one to love people. To explore their goodness so that one can witness the bright side of the world. To keep a good mood requires one to read more, to communicate with great minds like Aristotle and Dante. In this way, one may broad his mind from what thoes great minds have to offer. This is where generousity and love comes from. The best way to stay healthy is not exercise, not examing body regularly but to keep a good mood, to stay healthy from the inside.

Travel Broadens The Mind No matter it was in the ancient times or the modern society, travel is always chosen as the best way to get to know the world. There is no denying that reavel broadens the mind. During a jorney to a new place, people come across with new friends and get to know their life experiences, some of which are inspiring, some are ponderable. These peope, more or less, have some shining points for us to learn from. Diffrent places have their own characters. Historical spots unveiled the mysterious history of the city. While we are sighing the grand work of our forfathers, we press these memories deep into our minds. What greater than human beings is the nature, she has never failed to surprise us. If the historical sights are the miracal of human, then the natural views are the works of God. They owns everything expected from us. Standing in front of these splendid works, nobody can hold his awe and sighing how small we are in this univers. What's more, in the ancient times when knowledge and skills were not that exploded, our forfathers took travel as the only way to explore the unknown world. There are thousands of ways to learn knowledge, but travel is the most effecient and interesting way to broaden the mind.