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Hello...I have registered here. -> Hello, I've just registered here.
Mmm...I'll hope to create a few contacts with interesting people. -> I hope to create a lasting relationship with a few interesting people.
It's great to talk, isn't it? -> It's great talking with people, isn't it?
Communication is important for me. -> Communication is important to me.
I want to know English because It erases confines. -> I want to learn English because it erases the language barrier between so many people.
I kept thinking of ways to explain why I corrected your sentences the way I did but I realized that the only explanation I had was because they sounded weird. I made them all sound like something native English speakers from California would say but I guess I have to work on how to explain things! XD
0 votedNovember 2, 20111I was born in Almetyevsk, but when I was 2 years my family and I moved to Moscow. -> I was born in Almetyevsk but when I was 2 years old my family and I moved to Moscow.
I am studying English and want to talk to him. -> I am studying English and I want to be able to speak to people in English. (I wasn't sure what you meant by talk to 'him'.)
It is useful to me in the future. -> I know it will be useful in the future. (You weren't grammatically incorrect, I don't think, but the sentence just sounded a little stiff. Mine is something a little more native, maybe.)
You are very good at English! Just a few minor mistakes and sentence boundary things! Keep up the good work! Also, the sentences I didn't correct were all perfect!
0 votedNovember 2, 20110i want go aboard one day. -> I want to go abroad one day.
i want to be an useful people and let my family are prond of me. -> I want to be a useful person and make my family proud of me.
I don't think the people above me are necessarily wrong. I just made it sound like something an average American person would say. Something that would sound very native to us. =)
0 votedOctober 28, 20110Hi,everyone here, I'm so happy for becoming a member of italk. -> Hi, everyone. I'm so happy to be able to become a member of italki.
I'm a highschool student now and i really into English coz i wanna study abroad and I’m a English buff. -> I'm a high school student now and I'm really into English because I want to study abroad. [I guess you can call me an English buff.] This can make you sound very natural.
So I am delighted to join you. -> Good!
what is more,i am a optimistic girl as well as a talented girl. -> What's more, I'm not only an optimistic girl but also a talented girl.
Though I am a highschool student I am not a bookworm at all. -> Good!
I am a leader of my school dancing team,and i like making friends, -> I'm a/the leader of my school dancing team and I like making friends. If there is more than one leader of your school dancing team, then you use a. If you are the only leader, then you use the.
Meantime,i also study hard and get a great marks in my course. -> In the meantime, I also study hard and get great marks in my classes.
So i do really pround of myslfe for i can balance my favourit as well as my study career. -> So I'm really proud of myself for being able to balance my hobbies with my studying.
At this point,i think study aborad is the best choice for me so that i can have enough freedom to to whtever i want to do,to be whoever i want to be.-> At this point, I think studying abroad is the best choice for me so that I can have the freedom to do whatever I want to do and to be whoever I want to be.
Therefor,i must do my every effort to study english and get a good gread in IELTST. -> Therefore, I must make every effort to study English and get a good score on the IELTS.
This is the simple reason why i am here now. -> That's the reason I'm here now.
And i wanna get help from all my friends. -> And I want to receive help from all my friends.
I'm glad that you were able to show off some of your skills in English (some people are a bit scared to use new sentence patterns and such) and I think if you keep on working hard, you'll be able to be fluent in no time! Very good job! ^-^
0 votedOctober 21, 20110Hi, I'm Juan, I want to study abroad of my country, but I have to learn and practice my english, I can help you with your spanish skills :D
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Hi, I'm Juan and I want to study abroad but I have to learn and practice my English first. I can help you with your Spanish skills. :D
0 votedOctober 19, 20110I lake making friends. -> [I like making friends.]
Fortunately,I major in English. -> If you are still in school right now then you should write [Fortunately, I'm majoring in English] but if you've already graduated then you should write [Fortunately, I majored in English]
I want to learn it better,especially in writing and speaking. -> [I want to improve more especially in writing and speaking]
Later, I have four classes this morning in listening and reading. -> If it's not morning, yet then [Later, I have four English listening and reading classes in the morning.] but if it's already morning then [Later this morning, I'll have four classes in English listening and reading.
That's all right for me. -> Not quite sure what you meant. Either you're okay with having the classes or you're done introducing yourself... one of them. =o
0 votedOctober 19, 20110- To add onto kimchibokkeumbap's (yum haha) answer.. As you know, there are *very generally* two types of speech levels in Korean: (I know there are technically more but just speaking very generally.) casual, 반말, and polite, 존댓말. Casually, you = 너 (neo) and me = 나 (na). When you're being polite, me = 저 (jeo) and you wouldn't really say 'you' at anybody when you're being polite. It's more common to use their name and some sort of suffix or a title i.e. ajusshi and so on.0 votedOctober 19, 20110
