First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello. My name is Almaz. I am 17 years old. I am from Russia. I was born in Almetyevsk but when I was 2 years old my family and I moved to Moscow.I am studying English and I want to be able to speak to people in English. I know it will be useful in the future. I want to become a translator. It is my dream.

I was born in Almetyevsk, but when I was 2 years my family and I moved to Moscow. -> I was born in Almetyevsk but when I was 2 years old my family and I moved to Moscow.

I am studying English and want to talk to him. -> I am studying English and I want to be able to speak to people in English. (I wasn't sure what you meant by talk to 'him'.)

It is useful to me in the future. -> I know it will be useful in the future. (You weren't grammatically incorrect, I don't think, but the sentence just sounded a little stiff. Mine is something a little more native, maybe.)

You are very good at English! Just a few minor mistakes and sentence boundary things! Keep up the good work! Also, the sentences I didn't correct were all perfect!