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First notebook entry: Introducing myself i want go aboard one day.i want to be an useful people and let my family are prond of me.

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i want go aboard one day. -> I want to go abroad one day.

i want to be an useful people and let my family are prond of me. -> I want to be a useful person and make my family proud of me.

I don't think the people above me are necessarily wrong. I just made it sound like something an average American person would say. Something that would sound very native to us. =)

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

i want go aboard one day.i want to be an useful people and let my family are prond of me.

This should be written this way:

I want to go abroad one day to be a useful individual* because I want my family to be proud of me.

note*(individual is used instead of people- because your are just pertaining to your self)

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I want to go abroad one day. I want to be a useful person and make my family be proud of me.

 

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