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- My Trip to Beijing (Fictional) Hi! Please help me correct my spelling and grammar. =) I have never been to Beijing but I have to write about it for my assignment. ^_^ 曉雨， 你好！ 你怎么样？ 上个月我去北京了。我以前去过北京。我真的喜欢这个城市。北京是中国的首都。北京位于中国北部。我坐飞机去的北京，坐了十二多个小时。 在北京的时候我参观了故宫。故宫是很有趣的地方因为故宫里有很多漂亮的对象。 当我中国的时候我真的喜欢在夜市购物和吃中国蛋炒饭。不过我不恨喜欢北京的天气， 北京的天气太热！ 但我还想去南京，可是时间不够了。 在中国的时候我很放松。所以我想再次去中国！ 明年我打算去南京。你去过南京吗？。你想和我一起去吗？ 回头见！ 心美 二零一一年 九月二十八日 This is what I'm trying to say: Hi Xiaoyu! How are you? Last month I went to Beijing. I have been to Beijing before. I really like this city. Beijing is the capital of China and is located in the north of China. I flew to beijing in a plane. The journey took 12 hours. In Beijing I visited the Forbidden City. The Forbidden City is a very interesting place with many beautiful objects (or artifacts?). When I was in China I really liked shopping at the night market and eating Chinese fried rice. But I did not like the weather, it was too hot! I also wanted to go to Nanjing but I did not have time. When I was in China I was very relaxed so I want to go again. I plan to go to Nanjing next year. Have you been to Nanjing before? Do you want to come with me? See you soon! Xinmei 28 September 2011 ---------------------- Thank you for your help!!September 29, 2011182
I've made some corrections and I've restructured some sentences to make them sound better. I think you've done very well. I understood everything. ^_^
I wish both of us have a good luck.
It's am. 1:27 am in the mornig morning now. I'm tired. A pile of books are on my desk and the desk is a mess. (I joined the two sentences up as they are short.)
I found the a way to learn English in on the internet. In fact, every way ways are is very hard, so I tryed tried some different ways. A lot of words are need to remenber, a lot of sentences are need to remenber. I need to memorize a lot of words and sentences. (I restructured this sentence to make it sound better. Remember - it's spelt like this.)
If I can In order use English very well, I must am requires required to work hard working by myself. Someone can help me, I know it, but the main point is me working in my book.
I costed It cost me a lot of time for to learn English, but my English is terrible. Er...sometimes Sometime's I feel disappointment disappointed. (You don't need a capital letter after an elipsis because you are carrying on the same sentence.)
This summer it's hot. I need to work, I need to study and I need a girlfriend. Er...of Of couse course, the weather is the weather, trouble is trouble.
Yes, I'm Ok ok. Maybe you have the same feelings like as mine. So I wish us have a good luck! (removed comma after so.)
I should sleep now.
Bye, everyone. Bye everyone. (No need for the comma here.)I wish both of us good luck.
It's 1:27 am in the morning now. I'm tired. A pile of books are on my desk and the desk is a mess.
I found a way to learn English on the internet. In fact, every way is very hard, so I tried some different ways. In order use English very well, I am required to work hard by myself. Someone can help me, I know, but the main point is me working in my book. It cost me a lot of time to learn English, but my English is terrible. Err… sometimes I feel disappointed.
This summer it’s hot. I need to work, I need to study and I need a girlfriend. Err… of course, the weather is the weather, trouble is trouble.
Yes, I'm ok. Maybe you have the same feelings as mine. So I wish us good luck! I should sleep now.
Bye everyone.
I hope this helps.
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