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Wish us have a good luck It's am. 1:27 in the mornig now. I'm tired. A pile of books on my desk. The desk is mess... I found the way to learn English in the internet. In fact, every ways are very hard, I tryed some different ways. A lot of words are need to remenber, a lot of sentences are need to remenber. If I can use English very well, I must requires hard working by myself. Someone can help me, I know it, but the point is me -- in my book. I costed a lot of time for learn English, but my English is terrible. Er... Sometime's I feel disappointment. This summer is hot. I need work, I need study and I need a girlfriend. Er...Of couse, weather is weather, trouble is trouble. Yes, I'm Ok. Maybe you have the same feeling like mine. So, wish us have a good luck ! I should sleep now. Bye, everyone.

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I've made some corrections and I've restructured some sentences to make them sound better.  I think you've done very well. I understood everything. ^_^

I wish both of us have a good luck.

It's am. 1:27 am in the mornig morning now. I'm tired. A pile of books are on my desk and the desk is a mess. (I joined the two sentences up as they are short.)

I found the a way to learn English in on the internet. In fact, every way ways are is very hard, so I tryed tried some different ways. A lot of words are need to remenber, a lot of sentences are need to remenber. I need to memorize a lot of words and sentences. (I restructured this sentence to make it sound better. Remember - it's spelt like this.)
If I can In order use English very well, I must am requires required to work hard working by myself. Someone can help me, I know it, but the main point is me working in my book.
I costed It cost me a lot of time for to learn English, but my English is terrible. Er...sometimes Sometime's I feel disappointment disappointed. (You don't need a capital letter after an elipsis because you are carrying on the same sentence.)
This summer it's hot. I need to work, I need to study and I need a girlfriend. Er...of Of couse course, the weather is the weather, trouble is trouble.
Yes, I'm Ok ok. Maybe you have the same feelings  like as mine. So I wish us have a good luck! (removed comma after so.)
I should sleep now.
Bye, everyone. Bye everyone. (No need for the comma here.)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I wish both of us good luck.

It's 1:27 am in the morning now. I'm tired. A pile of books are on my desk and the desk is a mess.

I found a way to learn English on the internet. In fact, every way is very hard, so I tried some different ways. In order use English very well, I am required to work hard by myself. Someone can help me, I know, but the main point is me working in my book. It cost me a lot of time to learn English, but my English is terrible. Err… sometimes I feel disappointed.

This summer it’s hot. I need to work, I need to study and I need a girlfriend. Err… of course, the weather is the weather, trouble is trouble.

Yes, I'm ok. Maybe you have the same feelings as mine. So I wish us good luck! I should sleep now.

 Bye everyone.

I hope this helps.

 

 

 

 

 

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Wish us have a good luck

right now itz 1.27am.
I'm feeling tired.
A pile of books is on my desk. The desk is messy...
In the Internet, I found  different ways to learn English but did not find any easy one. It needs to memorise lot of words and sentences for effective use of english. For this purpose, I must have to work hard . although others help can excel my ability to learn, but best help would be if i help myself and my books can also help me a lot. Although I spent a vast of time for learning English, but it is still terrible. Thats why sometimes I feel disappointed.
This summer is hot.
I need to do work, to study and also a girlfriend. Er...Ofcourse, weather is weather, trouble is trouble.
Yes, I'm Ok now. Maybe you have the same feelings as mine. So, wish both of us a good luck !
Its time to sleep.
Bye, everyone.

 

*I try my best to correct.

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Wish us a good luck

It's 1:27 am in the mornig right now. I'm tired. A pile of books is on my desk. The desk is a mess. I found a way to learn English on the internet. I tried many different ways but every other way is very hard. A lot of words need to be memorized. A lot of sentences need to be memorized.
It requires hard working by myself if I want to be able to use English very well. Only I and my book can help me. It will take a lot of time to learn English because my English is terrible. Err... sometimes I feel disappointed.
This summer is hot. I need to work, I need to study and I need a girlfriend. Err... ofcourse, weather is weather, trouble is trouble.
Yes, I'm ok now. Maybe you have the same feelings as mine. So wish us both a good luck !

I should go to sleep now. Bye everyone.

 

* Have a good night and take it easy buddy. I wish you the best of luck! =)

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