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I've made some corrections and I've restructured some sentences to make them sound better. I think you've done very well. I understood everything. ^_^
I wish both of us have a good luck.
It's am. 1:27 am in the mornig morning now. I'm tired. A pile of books are on my desk and the desk is a mess. (I joined the two sentences up as they are short.)
I found the a way to learn English in on the internet. In fact, every way ways are is very hard, so I tryed tried some different ways. A lot of words are need to remenber, a lot of sentences are need to remenber. I need to memorize a lot of words and sentences. (I restructured this sentence to make it sound better. Remember - it's spelt like this.)
If I can In order use English very well, I must am requires required to work hard working by myself. Someone can help me, I know it, but the main point is me working in my book.
I costed It cost me a lot of time for to learn English, but my English is terrible. Er...sometimes Sometime's I feel disappointment disappointed. (You don't need a capital letter after an elipsis because you are carrying on the same sentence.)
This summer it's hot. I need to work, I need to study and I need a girlfriend. Er...of Of couse course, the weather is the weather, trouble is trouble.
Yes, I'm Ok ok. Maybe you have the same feelings like as mine. So I wish us have a good luck! (removed comma after so.)
I should sleep now.
Bye, everyone. Bye everyone. (No need for the comma here.)
I wish both of us good luck.
It's 1:27 am in the morning now. I'm tired. A pile of books are on my desk and the desk is a mess.
I found a way to learn English on the internet. In fact, every way is very hard, so I tried some different ways. In order use English very well, I am required to work hard by myself. Someone can help me, I know, but the main point is me working in my book. It cost me a lot of time to learn English, but my English is terrible. Err… sometimes I feel disappointed.
This summer it’s hot. I need to work, I need to study and I need a girlfriend. Err… of course, the weather is the weather, trouble is trouble.
Yes, I'm ok. Maybe you have the same feelings as mine. So I wish us good luck! I should sleep now.
Bye everyone.
I hope this helps.
Wish us have a good luck
right now itz 1.27am.
I'm feeling tired.
A pile of books is on my desk. The desk is messy...
In the Internet, I found different ways to learn English but did not find any easy one. It needs to memorise lot of words and sentences for effective use of english. For this purpose, I must have to work hard . although others help can excel my ability to learn, but best help would be if i help myself and my books can also help me a lot. Although I spent a vast of time for learning English, but it is still terrible. Thats why sometimes I feel disappointed.
This summer is hot.
I need to do work, to study and also a girlfriend. Er...Ofcourse, weather is weather, trouble is trouble.
Yes, I'm Ok now. Maybe you have the same feelings as mine. So, wish both of us a good luck !
Its time to sleep.
Bye, everyone.
*I try my best to correct.
Wish us a good luck
It's 1:27 am in the mornig right now. I'm tired. A pile of books is on my desk. The desk is a mess. I found a way to learn English on the internet. I tried many different ways but every other way is very hard. A lot of words need to be memorized. A lot of sentences need to be memorized.
It requires hard working by myself if I want to be able to use English very well. Only I and my book can help me. It will take a lot of time to learn English because my English is terrible. Err... sometimes I feel disappointed.
This summer is hot. I need to work, I need to study and I need a girlfriend. Err... ofcourse, weather is weather, trouble is trouble.
Yes, I'm ok now. Maybe you have the same feelings as mine. So wish us both a good luck !
I should go to sleep now. Bye everyone.
* Have a good night and take it easy buddy. I wish you the best of luck! =)
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